OMG!! it's so good :D u've got to continue it ;-; it's AMAZING srly!! i read it all in one go and i fell in ♥ with it >o< so please do make more

Great story!

Nice story! Pls update soon!

Please continue the story. This is definitely in my top five Shinji/Rei stories ever.

I really like the style this is in.
No OOC-ness.
Grammar, sehr gut.
Spelling, Fantastich.
Interesting, and made we want to read more.

is this fic dead..., PLEASE UPDATE

Heh, you have a talent for banter. This is definitely one of your funnier chapters. Rei gave as good as she got. And go Shinji! I didn't think he had it in him.

While I agree to some extent that Rei would have to mirror Shinji's thoughts in some manner to emulate him, I think you went a little too far in having Rei know him to such a specific degree. That would require her to have more perception and empathy than even most regular people.

Other than that, I liked it. You're managing to get in more description without losing Rei's dry tone. You managed to have Shinji and Rei both confront Asuka in a way that felt believable.

I was a bit worried that Gendo was actually going to read the notebook. I was even more surprised that she carried it around with her in such an obvious fashion though I suppose she wouldn't feel a need to hide it.

Rei's thoughts are humorous at times. It's even funnier when I realize that she intends to be completely serious. It's interesting that she seems quite skilled at analyzing the emotions of others but not herself. Her definition of beauty is intriguing as I have never thought of the concept in such a manner before.

I'm amazed that I have somehow overlooked this story, but I don't read as much fanfic as I used to. The plot has barely begun and yet I'm already hooked. I'm definitely reading the rest of this.

I think you've captured Rei's voice quite well. Of course her writing would be analytical and to the point. I'd be surprised if it was any other way at this point. The idea of a notebook spawning changes really appeals to me as it is such a simple yet also brilliant idea.

Great story. Now could you PLEASE update already?!

Ah. I must say i have enjoyed this fic today and look forward to your next update. Man i really need to find the manga.

This was a nice little chapter that showed a good interaction between Dr. Akagi and Rei. I am interested to see what Rei will be using the genetically altered plant for as well as to see what will be happening in the next chapter.

I love it! This is a great fanfic. I read part of it quite a while ago, and now that theres a bunch of new chapters, I HAD to read it again. This is one of my alltime favorites! Your style of writing Rei is perfect! And thank you for not choking Rei with Akagi's... heart-beat-sound-thing... I cant remember what it's called. But that scene was so evil... ~_~ I was sad. ANYWAY! PLEASE CONTINUE!

Hi—long time reader, here, ever since the first chapter.

I haven't been the best about reviewing stories I've read, I'll admit that up front, but...*Please* update this lovely tale, I do beg of you!