Hey Lilani, great Story! I loved it the whole way through :) Found this through and I gotta say *claps* your very fluent in writting ^^ Enjoyed reading this very much, thank you for uploading this awesome story :)

*sniff* It is the best epilogue to a story I have ever heard before. All the loose ends (If there was any left ^^) was rabbed up in a silk ribon as nicely. Great job! Watch out I have you on author alert :P Looking forward to your next great story!

Aw, *sniff* that was so sweet! It made me teary-eyed. I'm glad (and sad) this story is wrapping up, and I cheered aloud when Chykisasa managed to verbally negate the contract. I was afraid (especially after your AN a few days ago) that something bad would happen. I'm glad to see that wasn't the case.

Excellent story! ^^

Nice long chapter :) Just the way i like it.

Long chapter is right, and a very good chapter! Please udate as soon as u can!

WOW cant wait untill the next update :D You really know how to make a good climax at the very end ^_^

I don't much mind the delays between chapters, it's like waiting for the next issue of a graphic novel to come out. I like having the time to read each at my own pace, and then being able to anticipate what is going to happen next.

I love the direction the story is going in!

This sounds intresting can't wait till u finish it.

Hehe wow its really a good story you are makeing here. I feel like it has been taken out of a book. Keep up the good work

HMm really nice can'wait for the nerxt chapter

wewt^^ star onion brigade time? keep up the good work, i really liked it =)

i think it was well written, and though there are 2 parts to the chapter, it doesnt seem fragmented at all. It feels more as if you left a cliffhanger. keep up the good work^^

Great job Lil. Your a fantastic writer and I hope to read more of this story soon. Keep up the good work!

(Lol and so you know this is Eloriana from ffxi =P Just thought you should know. Hope your doing well. ^^ )

nice chapter^^ i would write more but im kinda in a rush. keep up the great work^^

oh... the plot continues to thicken =D cant wait to find out more, keep up the great work^^