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| Banjarak 2006-06-11 ch 1, | abuseupdate soon. I hope she's not a mary-sue... |
| iCraft 2006-06-11 ch 1, | abuseThis sounds like it will be interesting! |
| Kelly Tolkien 2006-06-08 ch 1, | abuseYeah, nice fic. You've got everybody pretty much in character, it's sounding a bit like the Da Vinci Code, a key, a woman. I take it that's half point? Just be careful not to close to the actual Da Vinci Code... But it's a really promising opening chapter, good, update soon! :D |
| QueenCaroline 2006-06-05 ch 1, | abuseWOW well i'm glad he isnt dead, i'm lovin this so far, i would love to see Robert and possibly sophie n fache cos theres quite a few silas stories but robert n sophie r never in them, if u can add them in i'd be so pleased, TY |
| FuchsiaII 2006-06-05 ch 1, | abuseI'm glad you started with Aringarosa. It does a fic good to have its priorities sorted straight - if it's a thriller-type fic with a mystery, it's really great that you're focusing on the characters relevant to that to begin with, and not just describing the woman. Although that should be interesting too :) ! Yeah, this looks as if it's going to be very interesting, do carry on...! |