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xquisittexabie
2008-06-01
ch 7,
abuseOh my goody god damn gumdrops this story is SO good i swear. Why are u leaving it like this ( read the chap 8 notice alredy) Dont u think 9 months is a bit long for a writers block? ehehehe... Do try to find ur inspiration again and update pwetty pweease?
MidnightMaddness
2008-03-17
ch 8,
abuseit would be wonderfull if u could finish the story but if you still have writters block maybe post some ur ideas and ask people to vote on them? if not i hpoe ur writters block ends!




if i have bad spelling it is because english is my 3 language
nequam_tenshi
2007-10-30
ch 8, anon.
abuseHave Flora abd Terra become goddes of the Earth
nequa_tenshi
2007-09-12
ch 8, anon.
abusehave them train/ have some fun; like a vaca.
Shalimar23
2006-11-11
ch 7,
abuselove it so much. PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON cuz i really want to know what happens next.
saPphiRe.'.m0i
2006-10-14
ch 7,
abusehey! i really love your story and i hope you update soon, but there's one thing..
The new boy/guy in chapter 7, you said he was called "helina" but isn't it helia? or are you changing the name a bit on purpose?;)
~sapphire.'.m0i
Lilly
2006-10-10
ch 7, anon.
abusethis is a wonderful story. please contuine. My vote is for Once a Queen. update soon.
NemesisMuse
2006-08-19
ch 6,
abuseTHis is compelling. Please update when you can
saPphiRe.'.m0i
2006-07-26
ch 6,
abusewow i can't believe i waited 22 days before i read the update :O
cause, well, you probably haven't noticed cause i haven't left you any reviews (and i am really sorry for that!!) but i'm reading your story since chapter 1 !! and i really love it..!!
so i hope your writers block and your moving dramas are over soon so you can update soon!! in the mean time you could always r&r one of my stories (A)
shadowbliss
2006-07-07
ch 6,
abuselove it wright more soon
Nastukashi-Bishoujo
2006-07-05
ch 6,
abusePLEASE!! UPDATE! I AM BEGGING YOU! I LOVE THIS STORY!! UPDATE PLEASE!
TheGoldenSlurpee
2006-06-29
ch 5,
abuseLa lala, Good story, It's past midnight, I'm not tired. Chibi Meesh: I'm bored, I WANT ICE CREAM! Lahar: you already had your Ice cream today. Morgan: (walks up) (this is a dude) Hey, (bison moo's). How's your summer so far? Me: (Blushes) Uh, okay, (Faints) Morgan: O.K., I'm leaving now. Chibi Meesh: NO! DON'T GO! I LOVE YOU!! Shawn: Hey, any chance I can come too? Pyra: Since no one else will say this, AND NOW FOR THE FUNNY!

"With all those clothes on, you'll never get a sun tan." "I also won't get skin cancer." "Yeah right, we don't even smoke!" This is from Aquamarine, but I don't remember it exactly since I only saw it once.
VOTF
2006-06-20
ch 4, anon.
abuseLove it can't wait for the update.
WinxFan
2006-06-19
ch 4, anon.
abuseI love it! keep updating the part where terra insulting Jack Spicer was really really funny i read 500 times ( the whole chapter i mean.)
sharkgirl2006
2006-06-16
ch 3,
abuseIt's awsome can't wait for the next chapter.
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