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| jamesoor 2007-08-26 ch 1, | abuse; |
| tennisgurl13 2007-04-01 ch 12, | abusegreat story! I love the part where Keiko saves the day! |
| son13 (i'm a girl by da way... 2007-01-21 ch 12, anon. | abuseOMG! THAT WAS THE BEST ** STORY I EVEER ** READ! INFACT IF THERE ARE FANFICS THIS LONG I ONLY READ THE FIRST-3RD CHAPS THAEN MOVE ON BUT THIS ON WAS FUNNY, DRAMATIC, ACTION, AND WOW LIKE... "NEXT TIME I WILL NOT HESITATE 2 KILL YOU" WOW! I FOUND THE STORY 2 B DEEP... YET IT IT WAS STILL FUNNY AS HELL! WELL THAT IS ALL... KEEP ON KEEPIN ON AND REMEMBER LIFES A GARDEN... DIG IT! YOUR #1 FAN 4 LIFE... -SON13 |
| son13 (i'm a girl by da way... 2007-01-21 ch 3, anon. | abusethat was damn funny! what with master fung and jack with the whole kim+rie thing... i think that you should leeave the couples the way they are! kimi and that stuck up mother ** geernald or whate ever his name is would so not make a good couple... i think you should leave it kim+rie and later in the story have gernald get killed or something! but that jack thing was halarious! he finally did something evil! well it was funny! i so wish u owned xs! i know i could count on u 4 awsome new episode! but sadly u do not... oh well life does go on... your #1 fan... -son13 |
| gabby 2006-10-26 ch 9, anon. | abusethat was awsome! it was funny when rai called the fat guy **! can you PLEASE write more! |
| momijikk 2006-09-16 ch 12, | abuseO omg! cliffie! can't wait till sequal! >w< yeah, is really good-good! plz write more! -momiji |
| fudge cakes AKA shadowboy16... 2006-09-11 ch 12, | abuseAGH DARKWIND ESCAPED AND IS COMING AFTER ME ARGH! |
| kawaii-4ever 2006-09-07 ch 12, | abuseIf it's truly the end then why do you have a sequel! oh, wait...nevermind. |
| TruePinay4eva 2006-09-07 ch 12, | abusewow... thats all |
| spinningisfun 2006-09-07 ch 12, | abuseOH NO! that was really good. |
| Duchess192 2006-09-07 ch 12, | abusedifferent |
| xiaoashwind 2006-09-07 ch 12, | abuseO awsome. So this means sequal right? I sure hope so! I wanna see more of this! It's great! -Ash-mei |
| HONK HONK AND Glow Frog Kyr... 2006-09-07 ch 12, | abuseNice little after thought that explains a lot...very helpful when it comes to the next story... |
| xXxProud to be weirdxXx 2006-08-19 ch 11, | abuseThis is 1 of the most awsomest story in the entire universe! |
| Lunarlion 2006-08-19 ch 11, | abuseHeh. |