 Literary Eagle 2007-12-10 . chapter 8Nice ending! It was satisfying, but still left stuff open for possible sequels. Yay! Congratulations on completing another great story! |
 Veleda 2007-12-09 . chapter 8(Think of this as a review for both 7 and8.)
Wow. Those were some very powerful final chapters. I've become so wrapped up in this story.
I really like the character development and revelations that were uncovered. They felt very powerful and very true.
We're left with a lot of unanswered questions, but the emotional closure made for a satisfying ending. |
 Literary Eagle 2007-12-06 . chapter 7Oh, that was an intense chapter! And so sad, too. Great stuff! |
 Literary Eagle 2007-10-20 . chapter 6Wow, already another update! Yay! (And I'll try to resist the urge to turn the dybbuk into a Gackt reference. Heh.) Very cool chapter, and I'm really curious to see what will happen with the Focalor connection. Please keep up the good work. ^_^ |
 Veleda 2007-10-19 . chapter 6Very, very good chapter. A lot of things that I've been waiting for happened (Izuru finally telling Mitani about his new abilities, the confrontation with Shin), as well as some stuff that I wasn't expecting. I'm really looking forward to the next chapter. |
 Literary Eagle 2007-10-13 . chapter 5Uh-oh, poor Izuru! I can't wait to see what happens next! |
 Veleda 2007-10-10 . chapter 5Please give me a moment of mindless joy: You updated! This is updated! OMG yay!
Um, thank you for that.
A lot of nice plot packed into this chapter. I liked it very much. It feels like things are really beginning to move.
The connection between Focalor and Izuru is even stranger and creepier than I first thought. I'm very intrigued and excited.
I love it when you write Yami no Matsuei. Hooray for not stupid people in this fandom. |
 Veleda 2007-02-16 . chapter 4I've put off reviewing this, because I'm not quite sure what to say. I don't like leaving reviews that say little more than, "this is good." Be that as it may...this chapter was really good. I loved the way you explored the various characters, and we got a nice hunk of plot. Yay! |
 Literary Eagle 2006-10-31 . chapter 4An interesting development, and as always you wrote it beautifully! It's also a real treat to see Chizuru again. Yay for cool minor characters! |
 Veleda 2006-10-16 . chapter 3Mm, this story is hitting so many of my fanfic kinks. Minor characters, casefic, and Japanese history. Definitely a few of my favorite things.
I'm really excited about where all these different plot points are going. Curse the wait! |
 Literary Eagle 2006-10-04 . chapter 3Another great chapter! You sure know how to keep a reader in suspense! Also, the "series of tubes" reference was hilarious. ^_^ |
 Veleda 2006-08-05 . chapter 2It's taken me this long to review! I am a bad, bad person.
Yum, case-fic. I adore case-fic. I really like the feel of this. The awkwardness between Mitani and Izuru rings very true to me. You illustrate the problems they now have with a lot of skill.
You've got me incredibly intrigued about Oshiro and his situation. Why is he still alive? And -what- is the mysterious sin he wants forgiveness for?
The suspense in your stories is going to give me an ulcer one of these days. And yet I will keep reading! Because I am a masochist. |
 Literary Eagle 2006-06-25 . chapter 2I liked the Count's role in this chapter. You always write such good stuff for the minor characters! ^_^ |
 Literary Eagle 2006-06-06 . chapter 1Your fanfics are always a treat. I'm eager to see where this story is going! |