so i've officially read every chapter of this fic and i LOVE IT! wonderful plot idea and sitting back waiting for more! :D

this story is simply amazing! it's taken me around three days to get caught up, and I can't wait to see how it continues!!

This chapter was INCREDIBLE! You captured the emotions perfectly! Loved every thing.

I was right about the sniping test. Wow. Great chapter. Now I have to go to work but I shall read and review more t-morrow.

This chapter is brilliant. I wasn't expecting you to go back to tell about Riza's time in academy. Not many authors would do that. You did seamlessly! The part about the sniper test was very clever.

I thought for a minute that from the title it would be Riza pregnant but then that wouldn't be very series like would it? I love the line the cashier made about obstacles. I enjoy the subtle bits of humor that you stick in the story to break up tension.

I think the way you had her decide to go into the military was great.

Once again your unshakable way of writing Roy and Riza come through. I love how you keep the manga in there but still tie in and make your fiction so believable.

Loved this. The way you write their relationship is so real. I don't see any two dimension in their personalities.

Oh! I can see that the next chapter will be very interesting! Not that this one wasn't, mind you ^_^ Aw... but for those who have read up to chapter 100 the things you keep alluding to with Roy's dependence on Riza are heartbreaking... Just a couple more weeks and chapter 101 will be out. I'm both deading and anticipating it >_<

Keep up with the updation! *hands MoonStarDutchess a pile of cookies*

A very nice retelling! I know you've said it's boring for you to have to write about scenes straight from the manga, but it is fun to read. There's a big difference between watching something and having to infer character's thoughts, and reading them directly. Keep up the good work!

OH! Good way for Maes to find out with the dog tags, that was unexpected ^_^

About your AN, how could anyone complain about there being too much romance >=C This is all about seeing their interactions in and out of the office setting. Well, it is for me at least... *mumbles angerly and goes off to sit in a corner*

I loved the bit about Roy watching Riza as she spoke with Rebecca, it was good to Riza would cry in front of someone other than Roy ^_^

During the part with Hayate I couldn't help looking down at my own dog (who happens to be an alaskan malamute as well) and hug her ^_^ The conversation between Roy and Maes was good, it's really making me look forward to the battle with Scar.