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Emi-Chan18
2009-12-05 . chapter 54
Really Good I really liked this chapter I can't wait for the next one update soon
Chibijac
2009-12-05 . chapter 54
aw poor riza being sick! :(
Deniece
2009-12-04 . chapter 54
I like how being sick partially changed Riza's way of thinking but on the other hand she's still trying her best to be tough and protect Roy with all her might. I felt like giving her a hug when she didn't want him to leave for work.

2009-12-03 . chapter 54
Wow, good chapter. It was SO cute, but poor Riza... a havent watched the show in a while, but I think maes dies soon.. dmn bad memory, heh.
Its REALLY sucks about your computer, mine has done that to me, unfortunately. I had a flash drive... but i lost it. At least nothing to important was on there.
soulcorsOnManga
2009-12-03 . chapter 54
soo good ! DX
draft-board
2009-12-03 . chapter 54
I really like how you ended up the chapter.
Keep up the good work~! :)
S4pph1r3
2009-12-03 . chapter 54
I love fics where one of them is sick, especially when its Riza.
She's always taking care, never being taken care of.
Thanks for another great chapter.
Rinoax
2009-12-03 . chapter 54
I love this so much.
I like how roy is worried and he care of her andd I love his chocolate tablet too xD

And the last scene of Riza didn't want him to go... because of worry and she want him with her all time(like roy xd)...umm it left me speechless all was so cute and lovely yay! :D
little miss clueless
2009-12-03 . chapter 54
I LOVED IT! gah this is insane! I am obsessed... the feelings in your writing being conveyed to the reader is intense! Loved it!
Daniel
2009-12-02 . chapter 54
Another great chapter, be sure to get Anti-virus software, I have Norton and it keeps me safe, they have a free scan and recovery tool.
C.A.M.E.O.1 and Only
2009-12-02 . chapter 54
Aw...It was SO darling! Riza's gonna feel SOO special when she gets better! Aw!
Athena's Heart
2009-12-02 . chapter 54
I love this. 'Her proverbial gloves were soaked'. Update asap!
Lyny Angell
2009-12-02 . chapter 54
Oh yeah, serious Royai ESP! lol, but I totally loved this, seriously. Obviously, I love the theme of Riza actually allowing Roy to take care of her on occasion, and I LOVE that he wants to do it. It was a really cute chapter, and I like how you handled all of the emotions, too. I look forward to your updates soo much! Everytime I read a chapter of this, I feel like I have something to look forward to in the next chapter =) And I also think that you described all of the flue symptoms really well in this. You went further than just to say that Riza felt like sick and actually detailed it all very well. Overall a great chapter, as always! And I seriously did enjoy reading the similarities between our stories.
Sorry to hear about your computer troubles! Trojans suck big time. Hope you're able to get most of your work back! I would cry if I lost that much of my writing due to a system crash, seriously...
Love and HUGS!
Lyny
Starry Pink
2009-12-02 . chapter 54
Very nice chapter, I really enjoyed it. I especially liked the little jokes thrown into the dialogue.

Sorry about your computer, btw. Over the summer my computer got some trojans too and crashed. Luckily, I had my most important files saved to my flash drive.
OTP
2009-12-02 . chapter 54
that darn flu always gets the better of you though i have never had the flu no i get bronchitis and strep and shingles never just a normal freaking cold *grumbles* anyways nicely done with this chappy glompie luvs hugs and pocky
teal'c
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