Wow XD I absolutely loved the ending!

“Zane?”

WHACK

Those two lines/words just made my day XD

Amazing job!

Cool! And a bit of brotherly bonding/love to tie it all together. But in chapter 4 when Atticus wanted to switch bodies with Alexis and he was checking her out... THEY'RE SIBLINGS! That would be like... incest. Unless you meant to do that, in which case, disregard that part of this review. BTW, love the plot, 'n good spelling 'n grammer! Thankies f'r postin' it!

S.S.

LOL!ZANE HITS CROWLER WITH A PILLOW AT THE END!HAHAHA!LOL!LOL!

yeah, i've thought about the slifer sleeping arrangements too; it should probably be from the top, Sy, Jay, Chum, not the way it is...if the bed breaks, sy's a pancake...

also, the thought of zane squeaking (even if it's really sy) frightens me...

oh WOW i remember this! i was Kaiseress before, and of course i still LOVE this thing! YAY INSANITY!

i love the story . you should do one where zane becomes a slifer for longer, like and alternate reality, and his brother is big man on campus. please write another

I love you. I really do. XD Original idea!

this was good!

i liked the ending.

That was EXCELLENT! I liked the end, it was pretty funny and I love the Royalshiping, I am so a Royalshipper!

I'm going to tell you this...this would definetely make a VERY good GX episode, except with the romance parts.

LOL! I love this story! U RULE!

Nice beginning.

Syrus' thought before he played Soul Exchange (which was very ironic) was a little ironic for me. I guess he forgot the fact that after you play Soul Exchange, you can't activate your Battle Phase. If you don't know what I mean, read Sy's thought

Before Syrus Plays Soul Exchange:

'Soul Exchange. Wait! I can use that to summon my UFOroid to the field. I'll sacrifice his Cyber Laser Dragon and attack him directly. That'll impress Zane'

So, just consider this as a helpful remark. I'm not trying to flame you.

Sorry if I have too many reviews.

Okay. This was hilarious! Poor Crowler. He got smacked with a pillow in his face twice. Next time I'll do it. Good job.

ooh I loved the ending where Zane hit Crowler in the face with a pillow. It was classic!

Hilarious! Go Zane! Down with Crowler!

a fluff it burns!

k anyways it was a good story besides the small amount of fluff...

the very end was good

10 JOIN

Love Fay