Hello, nice descriptive vignettes.

A couple of points however;
Galadriel was not Sindarin, her father was Finarfin of the Noldor and her mother was Earwen of the Teleri. Also she had Vanyarian blood because her Grandmother,Indis, was Vanyar.

Celeborn did not long for Valinor as Galadriel did, he in fact passed west much later.

Celebrian did not die, but passed west in 2500 of the 3rd age because of her torment by Orcs.

I enjoyed your stlye of writing though, very melancholy.

Keep writing. Ninnaras

Interesting however bok points Galadriel was not Sindarin but Noldorin, and Celebrian never died. She sailed west to Valinor in order to avoid fading which is what the elves considered to be dying. Celeborn did not sail with Galadriel but remained in ME until the last of the Galadhrim sailed sometime in the Fourth Age.