Reviews for Mistake, Unexpected

Reviews For: Mistake, Unexpected

Tanokai 2006-12-12 ch 1,	abuseCute! I love it! I love the couple.. Please continue PLEASE cries
Priestess Hinoto 2006-08-28 ch 1,	abuseAck! Haven't been updated since June?! NO... Please update this fanfic and not let this be one of those many incompleted ones! The story is good! ^_^ Please update soon! =D
Anna 2006-07-08 ch 1, anon.	abusePlease continue. Tetheous fans aren't in the habit of taking just a taste. Please remenber that.
xxDKGurlxx 2006-06-08 ch 1,	abuse:drooldrooldrool: ungh...i loved it...IT MUST BE UPDATED!IT MUST BE A STORY! O_O_O :drrols all over fic: please update!pleasepleaseplease! THE super-flying-squirrel-queen, Daphne~
Vuirneen 2006-06-07 ch 1,	abuseHa! What was wonderful about this was how much sense it made, how easily they fell into your trap and how natural their relationship became. Obviously, Tetheus had been secretly lusting after Kai-Stern for years, or else didn't realise how nice a bit of open company is. It should have seemed like a blatant seet-up for the sole purpose of author-wanting fluff, but it wasn't. Halfway through, when Kai-Stern was about to sleep on the floor, I did wonder why the relationship was so important that they couldn't come clean - I really like my sleep - but I soon slipped back in. Nice surprise. Write more. Is this a once-off, or a springboard? Maybe next time Kai-Stern, or perhaps Tetheus would do it on purpose.
Misura 2006-06-06 ch 1,	abuseLoved to read this; I don't know how much of this you wrote last year, but I'm very glad you decided to finish up this piece and post it for everyone's enjoyment. I liked the way you created the Hartian culture; it didn't slap readers in the face anywhere (like going 'hey, look, I created an alien culture, and I'll now tell you all about it just to show off my wicked skills of creativity!') but it was subtly present in a lot of scenes, adding that taste of other-worldliness that makes for a great SF or fantasy-read. I also loved the way Tetheus and Kai-stern (well, okay, perhaps Tetheus a bit more emphatically than Kai-stern) didn't just decide that, since the Hartians had made the mistake, they might as well get into an actual relationship. I have to confess I was half-expecting that by the time they discovered they got a room with only one bed, which made me laugh out loud when poor Kai-stern ended up sleeping on the floor. coughs Thanks for a great read! ^_^
Angstluver 2006-06-05 ch 1,	abuseI was in hysterics the entire time I read this. That's the most laughing I'v done in that last month! Nice writing and it was certaintly enjoyable! Thanks for the treat! ^-^
Animegoil 2006-06-05 ch 1,	abusesquealed A new fic! Yay! And I've always loved what you've made of the Dragon KNights world, it's so convicing and full of details that it makes it thoroughly entertaining and believable to read. I seriously love all your fics! And what a great way to shove them together without them actuall being an item. I've always liked how you have Kaistern and Tetheus so.. in tune with each other, the perfect partners in crime ^_^. The whole prince-revolution was amusing, though I had thought you were going to take it a bit further than that, but it's fine. The bantering was amusing and in character. poor Alfeegi sigh Man, your characterization of the characters has got to be my favorite out of all the other authors I've read. It's just so belieavable and complex and human, and full of those detials that intrigue. Keep up the great work thumbs up I'll be weeping everyday til I see somethign new from you! ^_^
Kitori 2006-06-05 ch 1,	abuseThis was cute. I really enjoy your DK fiction.

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