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Olaf74 2008-03-27 . chapter 6
I'm lost of words. Your Story is more than Fantastic. Please continue it as soon as possible.
Luc 2007-10-03 . chapter 2
I don't like these elves. They're so abusive and intrusive, pushy, angry and they trample over Harry's emotions like nothing. Trolls.
Aren't they suppose to be, I don't know, intuitive and empathy? and yet they manhandle Harry despite his injuries, physical and mental. No matter what, I don't think that after these couple of chapters I could ever like them or see them in better light.
Merrymow 2007-05-29 . chapter 6
I was wondering when you're going to update?
Cynthia1850 2007-04-11 . chapter 6
I like the plot line, Harry needs to toughen up a bit, and I'm glad that you are going to rewrite it to a new story. Don't give up on your idea, it's good.
wolfawaken 2007-02-15 . chapter 5
I do hope you update soon. Story is good and seems to improve every chapter.
BlackOdessa 2007-02-01 . chapter 5
Good story i like it, will it be another chapter soon?
weareserialkillers 2006-12-20 . chapter 5
Your story so far is pretty good, it makes a lot more sense than some of the middle earth/harry potter crossover stories. I have a question though, what does muindor mean? I haven't actually read the LoTR, just seen the movies. Which might be why some stories don't make sense... lol... Gotta go! Bye!
~weareserialkillers~

p.s. Some people have a strange idea that I'm actually a serial killer, the username involved too much sugar, a hyper friend, and a boring class. Sorry, I've just been annoyed with how many people have commented on my username. :-)
matealeen 2006-12-11 . chapter 5
i don't particularly like the idea of a weak and pathetic harry: come on, he's 14 and had just faced the tournament, he has more guts than that and would have stood up to his uncle. in 3rd year, just because of a remark his aunt marge made, he blew her up: i don't think that he would just stand a beating from vernon and not do anything. you have martyrised him way too much, so it's not very believable. should you have done that when he was younger, before hogwarts, it would be a bit more believable but not now.
moreover, all his family coming back to life like that? come on! too far-fetched. i know that magic can give authors plenty of liberty for creativiy, but even then, you have to have some logic: first, they would have checked up on their son earlier. second, if dumby has such a simple way to go to rivendel, that means that they too could have gone to earth earlier. and lily knows her sister very well, she would not have permitted that, while james would have stood up for sirius.
well, these are just examples of all the loopholes in your fic.
i don't review just to demoralise you: if i took the time to write, it's because i think that you have potential, it's shown on the way you write. i hope you will take this review as it is: constructive criticism to improve your story.
i really hope that it will help you in the future, whether you follow my advice or not, but don't stop writing.
DanielHimura 2006-11-15 . chapter 5
Good story so far.
Maybe you should take him to his uncle´s house and cut his uncle´s arms in front of him, i know that is what i would do.
Is here a time diference in both places?
Merrymow 2006-10-23 . chapter 5
I was wondering when you're going to update.
Yana5 2006-07-15 . chapter 5
Harry be ok
Touch of the Wind 2006-07-11 . chapter 5
Nice story, update soon!
BabyInu 317 2006-07-06 . chapter 5
I thank you should write some more!

Good work keep it up!
meh 2006-07-02 . chapter 1
okee dokey then... that was pre-ty BAD. your entire style annoys me. ick.
Marikili68 2006-07-01 . chapter 5
i love your story update soon
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