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| Andrea 2008-09-27 ch 1, anon. | abuseOnly read till chapter 6, cause this story is so bad written. Sakura seems really silly, all angsty in a stupid way. The way of explaining things is really poor. I can't undertants poeple saying they're 'Hookep up' to such a cheap story. |
| superme383 2008-08-18 ch 9,  | abusethis fic has a great story-line, but you kinda rushed it tho, like in the last chaoter, you squished it all together , and thats the downsfall of the story... |
| Nemi-the-fallen-angel 2007-10-12 ch 5, | abusewow this story has me hooked |
| dragondreamer99 2007-05-14 ch 1, | abuseaw, thats really good (and cute ^^) - although ive only read the first chapter lol - (i'll read the rest tomorrow, promise ^^) - great so far though ^^ |
| shurikengrl 2007-02-27 ch 3, | abuseum, that part about orochimaru is totally disgusting! bleck! it burned my eyes when i read it. he's evil!he's also gay looking. |
| shurikengrl 2007-02-27 ch 2, | abuseumm, why did you put ino in the team? it sounds kind of weird...she doesn't fit in with the other people. but i guess i think that because i hate her guts, lol? |
| shurikengrl 2007-02-27 ch 1, | abuseaaw, so cute, but sad that gaara forgot about sakura. naruto is so mean sounding. sakura sounds kind of ooc. she's never a **. |
| o0Dreamer0o 2007-02-09 ch 9, | abuseaw, the story was cute :D |
| estwo-BELiNDiS'love 2007-02-01 ch 9, | abuseAWE!! that was a sweet ending...it was nice. YAY! its good except for orochimaru who is soo evil!well good story! |
| Da Bitchy BitchSlapin Kunoi... 2007-01-06 ch 9, | abusei like the story even thoe naruto was a lil dick head in it & i think it should have a sequel to it but with out naruto being a lil dick head if he is gonna be a lil dick head it then don't don't put him in it yest say he on a mission os some thin |
| Da Bitchy BitchSlapin Kunoi... 2007-01-06 ch 7, | abuseWAT THE ** IS UP WIT NARUTO HOW COULD HE ** DO TO HER WAT THE ** MADE DA ** NINJA HYPER BOY DAT WE ALL KNOW & LOVE DO DAT KIND OF ** ** TO HER WAT THE ** ** HAPPEN TO HIM TO DO ** **! (IF U CAN'T ** TELL I'M ** ** DA ** OFF & WHEN I'M ** ** DA ** OFF I SAY **,**,** ECT. ECT... BUT I'M STILL A ** BITCHY ** BUT NOT AS MUCH AS I AM WHEN I'M ** ** DA ** OFF.) >:( |
| BadBoysMistress 2006-11-24 ch 9, | abuseThat was a cute ending... AND IT DIDN'T SUCK!! I really liked it! ^-^~*~^-^~*~^-^ BadBoysMistress |
| Jaded56 2006-11-04 ch 3, | abusehey!...sori bwt my last comment cuz wht i meant to say was...AWESOME STORY!...n IS IT REALI OVER?!..i love this aw!!...peace |
| Jaded56 2006-11-04 ch 2, | abusegaara/sakura 4evr..this fic rocks!! lolz...nice story...is it over?!...peace |
| .Faking.This.Smile. 2006-11-02 ch 9, | abuseActual the ending was pretty good |