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sparky24 2008-04-28 ch 3,	abuseWow. I have never seen a fanfiction story cross both Huxley and Joyce before, and given the state of most fanfiction (including my own) probably never will again. Great story. In fact all of your stories are very well done. I've enjoyed spending my time reading the various one offs and will probably dive into your crossover with Gravity's Rainbow. Though that last one still gives me second thougts.But if you can fit Joyce and Huxley into Kim Possible, you probably can fit Pynchon too.
MidnightzStorm 2007-07-07 ch 2,	abuseThe jumping around kind of confuses me. Why was Ron dressed like Zorpox?
Kipcha 2007-06-20 ch 3,	abuseEXCELLENT! BRAVO!
Trombe 2007-05-23 ch 3,	abuseExcellent job as always. This one truly made be a believer in the Kim/Ron relationship. I thought your stories with them as preteens was good. Man this was just too good to describe in words. Right here, yeah just right here. “Don’t even,” Kim laughed. “Wow,” she said looking at it, “I never knew.” “I always knew,” Ron smiled. Very VERY moving. The prospect of someone who loves you knows you more then you know yourself is a very moving depiction of how deep Ron's love runs for Kim.
Jillie Rose 2007-04-20 ch 3,	abuseThat is just the sweetest thing ever. No, really. I mean it.
CastaS 2006-12-02 ch 3,	abusegreat story, i enjoyed it much.
SassMasterGeneral 2006-07-03 ch 3,	abuseThank you for this great story
surforst 2006-07-02 ch 3,	abuseWell another good chapter and I must say a nice save on Ron's part. 'Love thoughts' indeed! Anyway glad Ron woke Kim up to the fact that guy's look at pretty girls all the time. It's when your boyfriend doesn't look that you should get really concerned. In fact very concerned but that's another issue. Anyway interesting points hit in this story and you got to feel for poor Rufus. Little guy's getting old after all. Anyway I'm a little bit concerned about that dream myself after all I know as an author that I don't put stuff like that in a story for no reason. Is it a future prediction I wonder? Good time to get a man for Shego and deal with that rage problem in a more constructive way I say. Solves everyones problems except for the poor sucker used to distract her. Well it was a good read while it lasted and looking forward to your next story.
MrDrP 2006-07-02 ch 3,	abuseThis was a spendid closing chapter, full of emotion, tension, and humor. The writing was smooth, the characters in charcter. You effectively used your kailedoscopic narrative format to bring your tale to a satisfying conclusion. Another great story; I'm looking forward to more!
mattb3671 2006-07-01 ch 3,	abuseOnce again, the Rondo shoots, he scores! Really good emotions in this. I dug it! THANKS!
conan98002 2006-07-01 ch 3,	abuseIf it had been anyone other than his Ronald, he would have seriously been reconsidering Anne Possible’s diagnosis from that afternoon.Kim Possible loved him in all his goofy, screwed-up essential Ronness.I really liked those lines.
AtomicFire 2006-07-01 ch 3,	abuseNow that was romantic! The last scene, simply wonderful in how you brought out Ron and Kim's true emotions with that single kiss to that unseen freckle. Finally we get to see where Zorpox came into the picture! The power of imagination combined with the power of the biggest villain around. And Ron is definetly a cartoon charachter... in more ways than one, all he needs to do is start wearing a t-shirt marked 'Acme Corp' and he's set. Thanks for the great read!
campy 2006-07-01 ch 3,	abuseVery nice. I'm so loving how love interacts with the Ronness and the Kimness, and vice versa.
surforst 2006-06-27 ch 2,	abuseWell another good chapter and a few interesting points brought up. One of course being Kim insane view of her very male boyfriend. There isn't a straight man alive who won't 'notice' an attractive female walk by. The fact that Ron joined up to enable him to 'notice' on a regular basis just proves that when it comes down to it he'll have all the mental components working. Still Ron's an idiot for confessing this so may God have mercy on his soul and all that. Boy needs Felix to pull him aside and tell him to never say he 'noticed' another female besides his GF. Not even to the wall because girls have a way of finding this stuff out. Now another point that caught me was Kim realizing that she put Ron in danger because of her going on missions. Interesting thing for her to notice and it's an accurate point. I know as an author in this fandom that I consider it to be a major thing to address. I'm guessing though that Ron is more in danger of being hurt by the tweebs then by one of the idiot villains Kim fights. Still accidents do happen so I hope his parents got a good life insurance plan out on the boy. Can't be too safe after all. Anyway good story and as for the second date issue you brought up earlier don't worry about it. Ron acted like he should and came off as unaware of what he was doing. Was it intentional? Yes but that part of Ron's mind was very effective on keeping it to a need to know basis. Wish our government could do the same. Anyway looking forward to what comes next.
SassMasterGeneral 2006-06-25 ch 2,	abuseMaybe I'm lose is Section Ten the Dream she told her mom? Great Chapter, love the ending def Space pod

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