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| Elizia 2006-06-07 ch 1, | abusewow, this is relly good! u need to update, fast! altho, id try and insert more dialogue if i were u! |
| Kyma 2006-06-05 ch 1, anon. | abuseAww, this is a cute story. Is it like a one chappy thing or are you gonna update? I hope you update... haha, it's nicely written and the plot, although used before, is still interesting. |
| mell8 2006-06-05 ch 1, | abuseI like! Update soon!! |