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Reviews For: Treacherous Betrayal & My Little Secret

Elizia
2006-06-07
ch 1,
abusewow, this is relly good! u need to update, fast!

altho, id try and insert more dialogue if i were u!
Kyma
2006-06-05
ch 1, anon.
abuseAww, this is a cute story. Is it like a one chappy thing or are you gonna update? I hope you update... haha, it's nicely written and the plot, although used before, is still interesting.
mell8
2006-06-05
ch 1,
abuseI like! Update soon!!
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