I had trouble finding the complete chapter 10, so if that happens to anyone else here's the link,
http://hpnewbie./35735.html
Or go to her homepage and click the link next to Web :Homepage.

i can't find the deleted scene!! Can u email it to me?? PLEASE!!

I loved it. This was definately a very interesting story. I hope to see more of your work. ^_^ Great job.

Awesome story canu send me the link to the deleted lemon on chapter10 plse pretty plse

I like it. =)

I absolutely LOVED it! I even found and read the cut out scene...I got a little nosebleed...it was totally awesome!

o/o i completely love it. i just left a comment on the open journal thing though. it was great! omfg i cant stress how much i liked it. thats the first one i read were sora actually goes with more the one guy, one not being riku. and i loved the story line. good job keep it up ^-^

that was truely an amazing story x3. lol i was just looking for a cloudxsora and came upon this story! it was so cute >.< plz write a sequel
keep up the good work
-ellie

Wow, I love it. plz write a sequal to wat happened after the collar came off.. XxAizenxIchigoXx out..

awesome...(i read the link^^) man that was hott! I LOVED IT! o man *sigh* im afraid im like yuffie cept im smart enough not to pass out...^^lolz man that was awesome...im sad thou b/c there arent very many cloudsora fanfics(just them)...do u think u could write another one with just sora and cloud..T_T u dont have to^^ i just want somethin good to read tho there have been a couple good ones...like this one^^

wow. OMG! This is amazing! And only like, the first chapter!
Hoo, can't wait to read the rest! xD

Totally gonna add this to my fave's

I love the story. Yuffie was hilarious :D

This one is by far my favorite in all the fictions you have written. The style is much better compared to the other 7 HP ones. Please write another story please ? *Xander's puppy dog eyes*

I'm not surprised with Sora being bottom all the time, though I imagine it must hurt everyday... But I'm rather surprised that Cloud and Leon don't do each other (laughs)

That was so f*ing hot, guess what? Not that it really matters, but your my new favorite author ^o^.