Absolutely amazing story so far. I love the OCs- the little details you give them make them into such realistic characters.
Jag is written incredibly well- I have loved watching him progress from a cold stranger whose motives are unreadable into the future leader of a massive rebellion...
Jacen's actions, how he's corrupted Zekk, and the coldness you hear in his conversations are very well done- they really show the darkness in him.
Saba's inclusion is great as well- she's a fascinating character, and I love the twist of her having shot down Devlin, and Jag's finding out about it. Absolutely excellent.
I've really enjoyed this story so far, and I really hope to see more of it soon.
Wonderful job so far! Please keep it up!

I love this fic ! It's wonderful !!
More soon , please ?

HOLY CRAP this is good. Ever since I started the NJO era I've really enjoyed Jagged; now with your ultra ** off Jag I can only sit and wait for the next up date. All the while contemplating the possible outcomes. Oh and with regards to the Dark jedi or jedi; somebody has forgoten the Way of the Open and the way of the closed fist. ANd for the record the highlight of the last two prequels were the clones.

Rock ON!

I love this fic XD

More soon !

Yea! Yea, yea, yea! :-)

*grins and pats Corran on the back*

Well, since I don't want Tarfang to come after me, here's a quick review :P :

I really like the direction this is going in! The characters are great, especially Juun and Tarfang. Heck, they're pretty much stealing the show right now! :p Keep up the good work!

~Jaina