this was amazing.

A fantastic study into the twins. I completely agree with your analysis and enjoyed reading the snippets of their lives at home. Their poor parents!

Although I will miss their special relationship, in both canon and in your fic, I'm very glad that they've started heading towards gaining identities of their own.

'It was the barest of touches...to look at in far-off corners of the room.' Loved this. Thank you for writing this!

This was so sweet, I liked the ending. Very nice :D

Bravo. The level of understanding you have of the twins is amazing. It's almost as though you write from experience. When ever I read things about the twins separating personalities, I can always feel a ghost of a tear in my eye. My sympathy goes out to them though I can't possibly know how they feel. Being an only child I only have myself to lean on but maybe having a twin and being an only child isn't so different after all.

Verry nice ...

Amazing. It portrays the twins characters very well, along with their wierd view of the world, and how it all changed one day. Very well written.

appreciate the character study a lot. you make their parents so amusing.
it's a bit like this fred and george from harry potter fic i read... as in they deal with the same theme of trying to deal with growing and changing to be different entities. really interesting =D

Nice story. I like how you have the twins actually HANDLE the issues that come up as they grow apart, instead of waffling about indecisively; the fact that this is so well written just makes the whole thing so much sweeter. :)

AMAZING. AWESOME. This was a very insightful piece. It was borderline perfect. perfect. = )

ah!! simply awesome how you managed to write this fanfic. i loved all the minute details and the progression of time and emotions! i hope you would write more ouran high school host club fanfics!!

Oh WOW. WOW! This was such an amazing story. The flow, the spontaneous style, I love it. This delved deep, very deep.

I particularly loved your explanation of why they part their hair like that. Ingenious! Kudos to you. This is truly one of the best I have EVER read.

I really like this.

Wonderful *wipes a phantom tear* Wonderful! ^_^

wonderful work, i really loved it. its great that you didnt overdo the sappiness - and the slight touch of sadness and nostalgia is really touching.

Aw that was really sad, but sweet. I think you have great character insight, and wrote that very well.