 The Mad Maiden 2009-10-25 . chapter 31I just needed to leave an incompassing review here. I really enjoyed reading all of the stories here. You did a wonderful job with the characterization and they were all really ingrossing reads. Thank you. :) |
 Red Walrus 2009-10-18 . chapter 26Out of all of these, this one is my favorite. You do a really good job portraying Roy's desperte struggle to turn away from his past and future, and the realization that he can't. Uber Kudos. |
 YourLifeInWords 2009-10-13 . chapter 32I thought I had added you my alerts list, but guess I didn't. I'm oh so sorry for not noticing that you wrote all this. I feel like such a horrible person now.
But these drabbles are just oh so beautiful. |
 My-name-is-foxglove 2009-10-13 . chapter 32Don't you worry 'bout ch. 100. I (medical student) and several others (including my Mom- retired doctor with 8 years experience) can guarantee Riza's carotid artery and trache haven't been cut, though maybe her jugular is damaged, if they stop the bleeding within 15-20 minutes, she should be fine. This is because the cut's near her shoulder, not under her chin. If it was under her chin ti would've been fatal, but since it was just abit above her shoulders, blood loss is the only thing we have to worry about really, and WHEN have any of Arakawa's characters died from BLOOD LOSS?
Anyway, great fic. I love the rare tone you used for Roy here, selfish and stubborn and detached- though I don't think he'd go as far as to call Hawkeye stupid. :D Anyway, 'Twas great. |
 Deniece 2009-10-13 . chapter 32Beautifully written, liked it a lot but man, do I hate the situation... |
 hillnink 2009-09-20 . chapter 31I've just read all of your 31 themes, and must say that you write Royai like no other. It's real when you do, I don't know how to describe it but hell, you're amazing.
It's simply amazing |
 chibiaries 2009-09-13 . chapter 27“Do not,” Roy hissed, “tell me I don’t care about Hawkeye.”
“Well—”
“I would not hurt her. I would not let myself hurt her. I’d fling the fire in the opposite direction if I had to, or I’d take the brunt of it myself. Don’t you dare think I’d let her pay the price for my mistakes.”
“Look,” Ed began, bewildered at the sudden passion in his languid superior, “I’m just saying it’s risky...”
Well. All these drabbles made me go "squee" and alternatively, 'aww' with lots of inner fangirly joy. Maybe some would say that Roy is acting a bit OOC but Riza has always been the one to get a reaction out of him (in the manga at least). Excellent work. |
 Jak The fox 2009-04-29 . chapter 15 In the manga , didn't Roy use the spark from Havoc's lighter to kill Lust because the gloves were wet. Which is also why the Transmutation was also cut into his hand...because he couldn't use the glove. Well maybe you did it intentionally and I apologize if you did. |
 AcidAngelTears 2009-04-28 . chapter 30Also, dammit, FMA manga. Stop fulfilling all my angsty, Envy-pretends-to-be-Roy-to-trick-Riza-and-causes-chaos-and-Roy-loses-it-and-omg-Royai fantasies. At this rate, I'll never stop writing fanfiction. -- WITH THIS COMPLETELY. I think that manga chapter inspired so many RoyAi fics, it's great (my RoyAi shipper is squeeing).
I love this chapter, I think you captured the characters really well =) |
 YourFavouitePlushie 2009-04-27 . chapter 30Brilliant chapter.
I love how you have shown Riza's emotions and how she's can't recognize Roy now that he's lost himself in revenge and rage.
Great writing. |
 Ruingaraf 2009-04-26 . chapter 30FANGIRLASM. Beautifully written. |
 Artemis of the Ice 2009-04-26 . chapter 30This is PERFECT. It's exactly in character with what I believe Riza would've been thinking during that chapter...perfect perfect perfect. Kudos. |
 Coco-Minu 2009-04-03 . chapter 29Ohoh, hilarious. Poor Roy. |
 Bizzy 2009-04-01 . chapter 29Kay. I definitely laughed out loud. I knew she was changing by the way she kicked everyone out, but even expecting it, I thought it was funny.
"Something inside Roy's skull began to fizzle."
Best line of the day. Totally prompted the laughter. And then "his boss was ogling the first lieutenant's breasts with all the sensitivity of a rock (or perhaps a particularly dumb sea urchin)". That was also hilarious. I just..laughed from when he opened the door on. |
 eternal-angelic-innocence 2009-04-01 . chapter 29Ah LOLz !! That was a fun portrayal of Roy. I love this bit "or perhaps a particularly dumb sea urchin"!!
I really enjoy reading this series of drabbles... Please don't stop writing.
But if you have to stop writing, please write a few more angsty drabbles *grings* |