Reviews for Of Thieves and Thief Catchers

Reviews For: Of Thieves and Thief Catchers

Yuki3x3 2007-06-30 ch 2,	abuseHahaha! Okay. I'm here to surprise you! I could tell you what I'm doing... but I don't want to! So I'm reviewing without telling you first! I finally remembered my password... see? Oh boy! You finally updated! That makes for a very happy Yuki! ^-^ It was a good update though! Very cute! Gotta love Varden and Lei'ella! The ending was cute too. Out of one fight and into another one... There's trouble everywhere they go! Ahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha! Okay That was stupid Yes? Yes. Okay I'll shut up now then Great addition! I'm looking forward to you adding another one! strikes you with the lightning bolt of inspiration realizes it was an actual lightning bolt watches as you turn into a pile of quivering ash Oops... hightails butt outta here ^-~
ImaPsychoSquirrel 2006-07-29 ch 1,	abusewow, I never really thought about that scene in quite that way, but it's true. It was a little short, but I like your writing style enough to forgive you for it ; ). I would love to see you write a few more of these, so please continue!
... 2006-07-16 ch 1, anon.	abusereally good, nicely original, but way too short. please write more! please?
Tinuel 2006-06-25 ch 1,	abuseI can put this into seperate reviews. As a basic reader, I must agree that this was rather short. And it was more towards emotion, not even seeming to touch on the actions that caused this. Perhaps you could throw in a bit of the struggle when he pinned her against the wall. Just so people dont need to refer to comic to remember/understand what happened. As an Inverloch reader, I enjoyed this a great deal. As soon as you mentioned her slumped on the floor, I remembered the scene and completely understood. You worded the emotion decently, as short as it seemed. And though it doesnt take great length of words to reveal the emotion behind a moment, perhaps a touch of something more would help. Good luck writing in the future ^.^
Psycho Mime 2006-06-23 ch 1,	abuseThat was great...for a start. Very insightful to Varden's POV for that scene, but way, way too short! Write more! ^^
FeatherWind 2006-06-12 ch 1,	abuseI like Varden, and the reasoning did sound an aweful lot like Varden, but it wasn't exactly a story!
Timeless Traveler 2006-06-07 ch 1,	abuseGood work. I think that Inverloch is a great comic too.
Grim137 2006-06-06 ch 1,	abuseHonestly this is really hard to review since not much happens and it feels like it is part of a story and not an actual story in and of itself (which is kind of true since this little piece of writing takes place between two pages of the actuall story). I guess over all it isn't bad even though nothing really happend. Theres just not much else to say about it.
Yuki3x3 2006-06-05 ch 1,	abuseAhem... Yay! I am the first to review! ...I think So let me use this moment to say: THAT TOTALLY STANK! No! No no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no! I'm kidding! I promise I'm kidding! That was really good! IT WAS REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY GOOD! It really was! And (no offense) I like it better than your story you wrote for English Anywho That was really good! It really was! I liked it! Ja! ^_~

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