Heh, the end was funny. Keep it up!

He's finally 'seen the light'... It's about time. I knew that there was some form of kindness within him :)

*silver-hedgehog

:0 This story is very interesting. xD ♥ all of the chapters, especially this chapter. x3 great job. ^^ Hope you update soon and keep up the awesome work! xD

very short, very short :o but nice! i liked it

1 little typo though, you said "food feelings" instead of "good feelings"

wow this chapter was totally the best so far! :D Albel was so heroic...at least I think that's the word XD

i can't wait for the next chapter! <3

Exsinion-sama, i love this chapter that Nel gets to keep the baby and Albel acepts his fate with her XD. Now you say there might/eill be 5-6 chapters more. please hope you think over through your month long break I'll waitt for that time for the new chapter to be post. :)

dude my heart was torn about Nel's parents forcing her the abortion, but my heart was being more tornd about Albel not caring again about Nels' problem. Now Albel is seeing things the right way now and hopefuly will stop them please. i'm loving this. XD

this story made me cry when it came out and what were the responce from both characters views but i hope it turns out good like any fics and books i read :D

That's so brave of Nel and so mean of Albel ut then again it is in character of Albel...!

Nice work. Hope to see another update soon!

aw this is really good

That was mean of Albel but then again, it is a quick fix though... But still, poor Nel, being left all alone... I hope you update soon!

o.o; what she gonna do...?

It's about fucking time you updated! Dear Lord woman!
Anyways, great chapter, one of the best yet, syntax wise.
Can't wait to read the rest of this story! <3
Love,
Your G-sissy :3

How long must this story take till... well can you at least stop this cliff hanger the suspance is driving me crazey and if you don't know any ideas than i would like to assist in this stories chapters.

man this story is very interesting and you must hurry up with the next chapter the suspence is driving me crazy. Also you have to excpress the chapters maore longer PLEASE.