Great fic! Would have liked to see just a bit more RyoXSaku. Maybe you can make an epilogue?

is this when they're older?

...thank you.

:3

(*lol* I shouldn't even be reading any Prince of Tennis fanfiction - after all, the reading of the first manga volume does not a fan make. [yeah, I probably severely butchered some fancy quote by saying that...])

Cute. It was a nice reading.

nah...it wasnt all that corny. in fact i liked it alot. it has a sort of calm feeling when i'm reading it...although i know sakuno was in trouble i had no anxiety or worries what-so-ever...or even when ryoma was beaten up and was bleeding...there was no feeling. just...felt glad everything was in place. funny feeling there. now THIS review is crappy. i have to stop. but you dont...do write more of these fics. love them.

so cool!

Haha, that was good. Maybe Sakuno narrowed her eyes too much, and some formatting problems, but in all, Sakuno was good to stand up for herself.

I was hoping for a snappy finishing line in this one-shot, but I guess it didn't happen.

I loved the way you divided to POVs into such small sections, it worked very well. But overall, the impact of the ending was weaker than the beginning.

Like this one-shot anyway. =D Keep writing Ryosaku!