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SnowsongIsAJaypawFan
2009-09-11 . chapter 1
Then she knocked him out cold and they were all happy. Except I bet that's not how it happens.
angietheunicorn
2008-01-05 . chapter 4
very nice.
may your fingers always be agile enough to write
keren
2007-09-24 . chapter 4
a really nice story but changing the story a bit!? hahaha keep up the ggod work I really like your story they are all so well written!
Daughter of Nature
2007-07-06 . chapter 4
Aw so cute
I liked the first chapter best :)
piwqefjk
2007-02-22 . chapter 4
Huzzah for AlannaxGeorge. And I like how you ended it too xD
HappeeGoLuckee
2006-07-17 . chapter 4
Muaha.
"What lass..."
I didn't think Marek knew...
Ah, well...
I liked it...
Blackie-San
2006-07-12 . chapter 4
i'm amazed that Rispah hasn't figured out what Marek meant, seeing as how often Alanna was at the Dancing Dove visiting George all those times...very nice update...is that going to be the last chapter (i'm referring to the summary:A thief. A knight. A joke. A kiss.)
music nerd
2006-07-11 . chapter 4
reading is indeed happy.
An Apple Bleeds At Twilight
2006-07-10 . chapter 4
This ending made me want to dance. I love it!

Glad my review inspired the last scene, which was perfect.

I loved the fact that Rispah was puzzled at the end, lol!

Anyways, loved it as always and I'm sad that it's over.

A/G fluff!

- Starlight and Notebook
Lioness of tortall
2006-07-10 . chapter 4
I liked the ending short and sweet !
I soo glad you decided to continue this story because this was originally a one shot ! hehe

GREAT AS ALWAYS !
BYE !
Indiaj
2006-07-09 . chapter 1
What ruined this for me was George's speech. In the books his accent is never thick enough to warrant actually changing and shortening words. Besides the occasional, and that means very occasional, dropped 'g' from a word like 'going.'
craazyladyy
2006-06-25 . chapter 3
eek! i love it!! please update soon!!
Blackie-San
2006-06-24 . chapter 3
very nice update.i was expecting her not to come...

and in answer to the question you asked me in the reply to that review:i have read many fanfics with the chapter titles completely different then what goes on in that chapter, even different then what is happening in the fanfic, but the chapter titles for your fanfics are completely perfect in the aspect that they sort of foreshadow an important part of that chapter.
Lioness of tortall
2006-06-23 . chapter 3
ha! its a 'kiss' isn't it !
I like the next chapter already !
ok chocolate chip cookie for me ! hehe

please update soon !
TP#1fan_gosandry/brairkel/dom!
2006-06-23 . chapter 3
the next chapters called 'A Kiss.' do i get a cookie? a chocolate chi oatmeal cookie?!
prettyprettyplease!
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