Keep up the great work, this is an awesome sequel so far, and its starting to heat up, :)

Having worked on the first half of this chapter with you was wonderful; having said that, knowing what happened in the second chapter was a blessing in that I could fully prepare myself as to lessen the rage...

...except the lessening of the rage towards Aturiel never came.

I feel I should react in proper /b/ fashion:

FU--

Also, if the next chapter takes 3 months to post, I'm flying out there just to smack you upside the head until it goes up. Don't think I won't do it!

Me again, though I've been reading since I last reviewed.

Good story, but one question: is this still going to be a crossover? I know you've got it set up to be longer than CoTP and Legacies, but the focus seems to have shifted away from the crossover aspect onto the 'Twos. This isn't necessarily a bad thing, but I'm just wondering how it'll be worked in.

Hey M-AJ it's me. I just wanted to tell you that with the execution of 95% of the Psi-slayers I´d say they wont be coming back till at least a 100 years later. But that's up to you. Nice chapter by the way, I cant wait for the next in the series! Keep writing, your one of the few maintaining the love of mewtwo out there, as am I but I cant write worth damm T_T.

Great story keep up the good work and remember to update soon.

Very good as always. I especially appreciate the characterizations of the different 'twos

Funny how my hatred of Aturiel grows so easily. XD

Ah well. He doesn't know what he's missing.

Fantastic writing as always, Commodore. And yes, I still have a lot of catching up to do. XD But thanks for the mention, and thanks as well for collaborating.

good series... I cant believe I read all three in 13 hours...

Hmm... interesting little subplot starting here. I'd think of something to do with Legacies but I really don't feel like combing my brain.

As a total geek thing, when this chapter got to the meeting part I was extremely reminded of a certain episode of Doctor Who from the new series. Except in that one the club members didn't try to use nanobots and DNA to turn into The Doctor. >_>

Splendid chapter! The beginning especially. All those grey and drab humans and walls makes such a contrast against Venius' yellow fur. And it was great to see that throwback to the Psi-Slayer that saved Shakara.
There's still a few typos scattered throughout, but nothing big.

Distracting you is fun =D

Excellent job dude, sorry for the late reply. I had finals and college work to do. Who knew "color and design" could be so time consuming?

The previous three chapters had me at the edge of my seat, wanting to see what will happen next. I have to admit that it got a bit too detailed in a few places (I think it was two chapters ago), but I pressed on to see what will happen next. It's like looking at a motion picture... only without the picture. :P

As for action, it definitely had that. The execution in the last chapter really showed the other character's feelings. It's kind of like that one movie... not sure what the name was. Had something to do with someone dieing and it made the main character a goal to follow or something.

Anyways, the story so far is going smoothly. I'm looking forward to the "construction of and entire society of Mewtwos" in the next chapter. Nice job, keep up the good work.

Read the chapter and quite frankly it lacked. I could tell he wasn't going to escape, change the tactic for once. CorkScrew would make an excellent surgical practise, but then again aneasthetics would be forbidden, wouldnt want him to miss out a chance to see his intestine explored with energy blades now would we? And I hope that in the end humanity suffers, so sevirely, that it will become extinct

this is cool I love this story! can't wait until the next chuck!

Thank you. Getting this next chunk out of the way...well, let me put it this way.

There were only four times, PERIOD, I cared so much about a story that it has affected me so deeply. The initial Mewtwo Strikes Back movie, Mewtwo Returns, the fanfiction "Damaged", and the majority of your work, Chapter 9 especially so.

The first time, after seeing Mewtwo Strikes Back, is what got me started into roleplaying and as deep into the Pokemon genre as I am. Damaged got me to realize how far the fandom went, as I saw how many people followed it.

...and your story...yours has revitalized an interest in taking up serious story-based roleplay that I haven't done in over two years, since I got out of college. The only reason I haven't jumped on it immediately is because I'm waiting for the entire trilogy to be finished, plus your revisions -- I plan on doing a storyline with a couple of people that intertwines with your complete works.

I should be re-signing up at the Temple soon; hope to see you there.

...one more note -- I DO have money now. I'll be looking for you on AIM; if you won't be there for a while, send me an e-mail. MewtwoStruckBack @ Hit me up with a PayPal address to send something to?

I'd have to say this is one of the best adventure stories in a long time. I cant wait untill u get the other chapters up. You are a gifted writer indeed.