 jess icah 2009-12-05 . chapter 12i love this story, its really great in my opinion. are u continuing it? |
 bananacupcakes 2009-11-27 . chapter 12Please continue :) |
 ChristinaAngel 2009-11-20 . chapter 12Hey you've started to do the starting a new line when a new person speaks thing! Much easier to read. I did like Sirius looking after Harry, even I did think that he wouldn't actually be that cruel to house elves, but I guess you could explain it away with a pureblood's upbringing. I like how Kreacher likes Harry and how Harry is making friends with Fleur and doing some matchmaking with her and Bill as well as Remus and Tonks, which I love.
I hope you feel better. |
 Gomenace 2009-11-18 . chapter 12I really wish you would continue the story. I is very good. |
 Beth 2009-11-17 . chapter 11 I loved you first story, and this is turning out to be just as cool. Please continue it! |
 reflex 2009-11-12 . chapter 12I love how you ae changing the story and keeping it following the story books at the same time. |
 AnnabethChase5450 2009-11-04 . chapter 12Why haven't you updated?! |
 Xx Kiamii xX 2009-10-11 . chapter 12His firebolt! NO! Boo. I love his firebolt. |
 honore 2009-10-07 . chapter 12More more, give me more I love this story really. You are wonderful. So looking forward to your next update. Thanks |
 swiftsword 2009-10-05 . chapter 12oh please write more. |
 dark shadowed rose 2009-09-29 . chapter 12Great story Can't wait for more... so UPDATE!! please |
 Kitiara Woodbane 2009-09-26 . chapter 12I really like this story, it is well written and I look forward to the next chapter.
Kitiara |
 Shadowface 2009-09-07 . chapter 12Looks as if you've given this up, but I just wanted to say that it's so far been awesome. If you find it in yourself to update, please do! |
 N 2009-08-21 . chapter 12 Why don't you continue it? :( It's one of my favourites. You are so great! Please, continue it! *trying to look like a little dog with big eyes* |
 Saturnblue 2009-07-06 . chapter 12I like the story so far even though it did have a bit of inconsistency and bad sentence structure that made the sentence or the meaning of the sentence not making any sense at all in some parts of the story but overall it was good. You slowly show Harry discover his power from the events he had experienced so far. It showed he is still learning. |