I really like this story so far. Especially how well you capture the Doctor's personality and energy. I hope you decide to continue.

This is really good

Ah, I'm so glad you updated this! Blimey, it's been a long time. But twas definitely worth waiting for.
This is fantastic! You have the Doctor and Rose spot on, with all the humour and an incredible plot to boot.
The dragons... Now that was impressive. At first, the amount of chemistry involved made me feel a little queasy (Chem and I do not get on) but I then appreciated just how well thought out the idea was. And that goes for the whole fic, really. Everything has brilliant, plausible sense behind, which just makes it a really believable Doctor Who story. And that, combined with the great writing, makes it pretty darn fantastic.
I love this. Can't wait for more... :D

Whee! You continued it!

Again, I am very curious as to what's behind this all. It seems a bit Stargate-y, but I don't mean that as a bad thing. Mnope. And I'm wondering where the heck these people were taken from (and if they were taken from the same places/times) when they have names like Rhonda and Mikhail. And my brain's coming up with theories now on what will happen, which is a good sign.

I noticed that you used "loose" instead of "lose" at one point, but that's the only technical error I saw.

I'm really enjoying this after a far-too-long silence from you. Part of that's because of the little details you slip in from the Doctor's past - I'd almost forgotten he had a grand-daughter.

You seem to have a real grasp of the Doctor's personality. He's more than just a intergalactic vagabond or space bum. After 900 years, and with his heritage as a Time Lord, it's unsurprising he often adopts a lofty, superior stance when dealing with other life-forms.

I liked the lesson on how a dragon flies "physiology draconis 101".

Sorry to hear it's only a two-parter but I'm enjoying trying to second-guess you on how the story's going. Who are the "Harvesters"? Rhonda's people who harvest the dragons? The Cold Ones who harvest Rhonda's people? And who are the Ironmasters? The entire planet sounds like someone's personal playground, someone with a control over time. Hm, will we be seeing a certain renegade Time-Lord in the next episode?

Your description of Rhonda is interesting. Reminds me of the likes of Red Sonja and Xena, Warrior Princess. Ah, Wasted Youth.

Awaiting the next episode.

Lovin it :-D
Nuff said really...
Jess
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All Right! Another story to delve into head first! Awesome-riffic as they say on Foster's...

*Is all sorts of intrigued*

This chapter was very nicely in character ("Boo-yakka, boo-yakka"...silly Doctor), and it was good of you to include some actual consequences for them landing on planets with different masses and atmospheric makeup than Earth. I really do wish you'd continue this, because while I'd love to archive it in my C2, I try not to include things that aren't complete. I will favorite it, though. Mmyes.

Hmm... are you going to write another chapter to this? Because this is me, showing interest... Hehe.

I really like the idea of this story. Especially as you put them both in a situation that was kind of *naturally* extreme. If you get what I mean. And also, you've written some brilliant Ten. The beginning really had me laughing - not only because what you'd written was funny, but also because I could really see Ten saying it. Which is always the sign of a great Doctor Who fic, I find...

So I'm going to add this to alerts and cross my fingers, in the hope that you write some more...

Wow, defintely adding to my Alert list. You really captured the atmosphere of the place, and it seems you've done a lot of research into this fic.

Looking forward to more!

It would be cool if you could check out my short drabble fic 'Hellmask' sometime.

Sakina x

What a brilliant surprise! It certainly makes up for a crappy day!

It's a great start to the story; I can really imagine David Tennant speaking the words and you've captured perfectly the Doctor/Rose double act.

Please post more- I'm hooked already.

Oh I LIKE :-D
Update hm?
Lookinf forward to it!
Jess x

I am vaguely familiar with Dr. Who and this promises to be intriguing. The title harkens to Wells' Time Machine and the general creepiness that went with it, along the harvesting line. Am curious to see where you go with this. (I'm always curious as to that...call it my curse. *rolls eyes*)

Hooray! :D
I think you've got yourself a chapter to be proud of, so here i am showing some interest in the hope that you'll write the next one soon!
I love the style of your writing, it's so engaging and you've definitely captured my curiosity as to where this is going to lead.
Bravo! x.x