Neji might be an icecube but atleast hes a loyal one

Skipping around time in one story is often confusing and definitely difficult...but you pulled it off flawlessly! I love how you showed Neji's emotions through his actions and his short, but well-chosen dialogue (my heart is still squeezing from gooey tender feelings!) And you balanced action and drama very well with romance. Fantastic job - as usual :)

It's an interesting sort of structure you have there ... but you made it work. :D Love the story. You really are an amazing writer. :)

You are probably the best NejiTen writer on this sight! This story was fantastic, like all your other pieces of work. I hope you keep writing.

Great ending!

I love the ending. Wonderful job!

a little confusing but good all the same

I like it. I understand everything and can piece it together in the right order, but I don't see why it needs to be that disjointed. Oh well, great job!

A few parts I didn't quite understand, but then again I'm not the sharpest tool in the shed. This one was great, I really enjoyed Neji's and TenTen's not so obvious relationship.

good one shot!

Aww...Totally adorable. I love it! I really like the way that the only "open" emotion Neji showed for Tenten was concern but he also let her rest on his shoulder. Very cute and not to OOC.

I really loved your story, it was sweet and exciting. At first I thought it might be confusing to read, but it really wasn't. Good job!

you have just made for a very, very happy reader. A very happy satisfied reader who wants to know what happens next and since she won't will just have to read all the rest of your work to try and fill the hole in her heart. Did I mention I was happy?

I loved the way you had Tenten and Neji respond to the circumstance! It was so realistic, and yet, so sweet!

This is a really great story. The time sequence is quite unique, and each scene is well-placed. I like the subtleties in the relationship between Neji and Tenten, nothing overt, nothing is ever revealed completely. Your writing is very artful.