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| CharmedPeacekeeper 2007-06-07 ch 1, anon. | abuse(I exist...too lazy to log in) Overall, a very cute story. You had some mild spelling/grammar problems, as well as a few typos, but nothing that really impeded a reader's understanding of the story. You had a great idea, and I really liked Phoebe's wishes ("Prue's wardrobe. Too much huh?") and the way you ended. So, like I said, a very cute story, and one that I enjoyed reading. Keep it up! |