Badass.

Wow great, dude. i really think you put alot of time and effort into this and i think that the story has a deeper message about morality that we can all learn from. i especally like the part where the space marine feels great sympathy for his lost companion who fell out of the escape pod and exploded. he was so overcome with emotion all he could do is sleep. this is a great metaphore for human compassion and struggle.

Epic

wtf is this ** this is complete **

Fael.

please write a pokemon fanfic

WAT WAS IT was it big wepon I have to kno! Please maek it be continued

Oh dear god. Learn to spell. Proofread, proofread again, and then have a few other people proofread. MAKE SURE YOUR SENTENCES AND STORY MAKE SENSE.

Love it! This is literary perfection!

A tribute:

/watch?v=QsRJWZ9qwNw

ok you need to die

this was one of the best storys ive ever read!

I am laughing my f' ** off... Theres no idea behind no story and the whole thing with teh grammar is well how do I put it...

Its like a four year old daft, dumb and blind fat kid with red eyes and cancerous tumors ALL over, hurled and his vomit made this story...

Go to and watch the sage read this out a loud... I love it...

Hi!

I absolutely love your fanfics. The fact that your English is subpar is actually what makes them amazingly fun. I almost wish you'd never learn proper English. I mean you should, but... yeah.

I LOVE THESE FANFICS!

Hope you write more!

Effing epic!

I am just in awe of this fic right now. I have never had so much fun while listening to someone read me fan fiction than I had with this story.

Joe Chief... words cannot describe how much I LOL when I hear that name now.

Congrats XD

Lol nice this actually got told by sage.

/videolinks/boredshitless/the-sage/fanfic-theatre/5321-episode-3-halo-halos-in-space