 A Critic 2009-11-28 . chapter 1 WHAT>THE...**... |
 Kron 2009-11-27 . chapter 1 this are be the review of the writings which are wroted. these words that are read make not the sense of words in any specific order.
it is here that i read but not understood the thing that was to be understood from reading the words which did not be made spelling correctly or in order specifically with a grammar.
is this what i give it 2/peanut |
 Steve 2009-10-19 . chapter 1 Badass. |
 Andrew 2009-10-01 . chapter 1 Wow great, dude. i really think you put alot of time and effort into this and i think that the story has a deeper message about morality that we can all learn from. i especally like the part where the space marine feels great sympathy for his lost companion who fell out of the escape pod and exploded. he was so overcome with emotion all he could do is sleep. this is a great metaphore for human compassion and struggle. |
 Vradix 2009-09-28 . chapter 1 Epic |
 hugh ass 2009-09-23 . chapter 1 wtf is this ** this is complete ** |
 Wow 2009-09-18 . chapter 1 Fael. |
 qwerrty 2009-08-27 . chapter 1 please write a pokemon fanfic |
 Joe Cheif Fan 2009-07-24 . chapter 1 WAT WAS IT was it big wepon I have to kno! Please maek it be continued |
 Keiya 2009-07-14 . chapter 1 Oh dear god. Learn to spell. Proofread, proofread again, and then have a few other people proofread. MAKE SURE YOUR SENTENCES AND STORY MAKE SENSE. |
 ThatBloodyPirate111 2009-06-26 . chapter 1Love it! This is literary perfection!
A tribute:
/watch?v=QsRJWZ9qwNw |
 anonymous 2009-06-01 . chapter 1 ok you need to die |
 Josh 2009-05-26 . chapter 1 this was one of the best storys ive ever read! |
 Kasper Teh Robot Liek Guy 2009-05-14 . chapter 1 I am laughing my f' ** off... Theres no idea behind no story and the whole thing with teh grammar is well how do I put it...
Its like a four year old daft, dumb and blind fat kid with red eyes and cancerous tumors ALL over, hurled and his vomit made this story...
Go to and watch the sage read this out a loud... I love it... |
 Sour Schuyler 2009-04-05 . chapter 1Hi!
I absolutely love your fanfics. The fact that your English is subpar is actually what makes them amazingly fun. I almost wish you'd never learn proper English. I mean you should, but... yeah.
I LOVE THESE FANFICS!
Hope you write more! |