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A Critic
2009-11-28 . chapter 1
WHAT>THE...**...
Kron
2009-11-27 . chapter 1
this are be the review of the writings which are wroted. these words that are read make not the sense of words in any specific order.
it is here that i read but not understood the thing that was to be understood from reading the words which did not be made spelling correctly or in order specifically with a grammar.
is this what i give it 2/peanut
Steve
2009-10-19 . chapter 1
Badass.
Andrew
2009-10-01 . chapter 1
Wow great, dude. i really think you put alot of time and effort into this and i think that the story has a deeper message about morality that we can all learn from. i especally like the part where the space marine feels great sympathy for his lost companion who fell out of the escape pod and exploded. he was so overcome with emotion all he could do is sleep. this is a great metaphore for human compassion and struggle.
Vradix
2009-09-28 . chapter 1
Epic
hugh ass
2009-09-23 . chapter 1
wtf is this ** this is complete **
Wow
2009-09-18 . chapter 1
Fael.
qwerrty
2009-08-27 . chapter 1
please write a pokemon fanfic
Joe Cheif Fan
2009-07-24 . chapter 1
WAT WAS IT was it big wepon I have to kno! Please maek it be continued
Keiya
2009-07-14 . chapter 1
Oh dear god. Learn to spell. Proofread, proofread again, and then have a few other people proofread. MAKE SURE YOUR SENTENCES AND STORY MAKE SENSE.
ThatBloodyPirate111
2009-06-26 . chapter 1
Love it! This is literary perfection!

A tribute:

/watch?v=QsRJWZ9qwNw
anonymous
2009-06-01 . chapter 1
ok you need to die
Josh
2009-05-26 . chapter 1
this was one of the best storys ive ever read!
Kasper Teh Robot Liek Guy
2009-05-14 . chapter 1
I am laughing my f' ** off... Theres no idea behind no story and the whole thing with teh grammar is well how do I put it...

Its like a four year old daft, dumb and blind fat kid with red eyes and cancerous tumors ALL over, hurled and his vomit made this story...

Go to and watch the sage read this out a loud... I love it...
Sour Schuyler
2009-04-05 . chapter 1
Hi!

I absolutely love your fanfics. The fact that your English is subpar is actually what makes them amazingly fun. I almost wish you'd never learn proper English. I mean you should, but... yeah.

I LOVE THESE FANFICS!

Hope you write more!
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