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| charlieeppes 2007-03-14 ch 4,  | abuseI loved this one and I would actually love to write this from Charlie's point of view, if I have the permission to! *applauds* Nicely done!! |
| Sushi Chi 2006-11-20 ch 4, | abuseGood story. You did very good at Don's character. |
| Patty 2006-06-13 ch 4, anon. | abuseGOOD JOB !! I thoroughly enjoyed this. You got into Don's head logically and brought him through the angst just fine. The small bits of humor were especially good, gathering up the shoelaces if necessary, comes to mind. Clever! Give your Dad a big hug for doing the beta read. He sounds like a prince of a guy! |
| NidrianRuuthane 2006-06-09 ch 4, | abuseNicely done. I was actually thinking about writing a fic about that scene myself but it looks like you beat me to it ;) I was having trouble with the math guys names too so dont feel bad, they look right to me:) Nice work. |
| Cascade Waters 2006-06-08 ch 4, | abuseThis was a great story! I'm sorry to hear about your depression. Ya ain't alone, babe. If you want to talk or vent or anything, drop me a line. fc |
| jlm110108 2006-06-08 ch 4, | abuseVery nice. I love the way you added Don's thoughts to the scenes. |
| Curtisbrothersfan 2006-06-08 ch 4, | abuseAw, this was such a great story. I really love how you were ableto add all that dialogue from the episode. Great job! I loved it! |
| The Lazy Reviewer 2006-06-08 ch 3, anon. | abuseYou're a pretty daggone good writer. Hoping for more. -TLR |
| thebondgirl 2006-06-08 ch 3, | abuseoh wow - this fic is perfect!:):) i just can't get enough of the way you've got don thinking, concerned and protective of charlie like he should be... it's just so sweet and perfect!:):) i know - not the best phrasing for a review, but it's the only way i can think of to put my like into words!;) can't wait for more!:):):) |
| Curtisbrothersfan 2006-06-08 ch 3, | abuseAwesome! Another great chapter. Too short for my taste, though. LOL. Keep going! |
| Sarai 2006-06-06 ch 2, | abuseI like it! |
| Curtisbrothersfan 2006-06-06 ch 2, | abuseWow. I'm glad you updated. I hadn't seen this story before. This is an awesome story! I love it! It brings back a lot of dialogue I missed the first time around. I love this story and the episode it's based off of. Keep it up! |
| The Silent Rumble 2006-06-06 ch 2, | abuseYou write good. Update soon please. -TSR |