nice start. Personally I'm not a huge fan of Kingdom hearts fan fiction but I do read it from time to time.

You should keep writing you have a unique style

By the way are you planning on updating your gundam fic anytime soon? Just wondering.

Ooh, I like this one, ones were they've been seperated for awhile always are the best. ;) Can't wait for the next chapter, I wanna know how Riku's doing :)

Love the story!

OMG this chapter was soo amazinng! only one word for it

SEXY!

plz...update soonn!! XDD

...la?? I LOVE IT! It was so funy. Wait what? Wrong story! It's still good though.