This is very well written
I really liked it it was creepy but in a very good way

Just finished the book, hated the ending. I know this sounds weird, but I thought Jerry would accidently kill Emile and feel tormented and guilty for the rest of his life. (My personal opinion; that would be a way better ending than the one I read. Kinda killed the whole book.) Anyways, love your little, "Beyond Beyond the Chocolate War" fic, and YES, they do need their own section. We need more yaoi! *evil laugh* :D

I just finished the book for school as well. It's weird that they don't have a section for this book eh? I figured many people would write yaoi stories for the book.. hmm maybe I'm just a big pervert or something but that's what I thought. Anyways great story.

Wow this was a really good story, I just finished reading the book and this would have been perfect to end the book. My class didn't think the real ending was good enough

This has NO reviews... And it's been up forever. Sorry for the late review, but I loved this. A lot. I love the book, and I have thought abou tthis kind of ending, and love the morbidity of the idea. Great job!