That was so sweet...this made me smile..
(im sorry i havent made this longer, but i stink at reviews

I like this...very, very much. beautiful

Smooth.

This was perfect.

OMG~~!! That was a wonderful piece of fanfic. The story flowed smoothly. It was sweet, short and poignant. Loved it so much. Hope you can write more IchiHime. =) Thanks.

Oh my..
what a great story!
short but very thougtful!!
"Ichigo doesn’t need someone to protect him by dying for him. He needs someone to live for him. So she will." --> yes, i think u got it right! those line pictured them perfectly!! ;D

this is amazing

that was sweet!

Wow! That was so powerful! I love that Ichigo hugs her so tightly it hurts because I can see that happening in the manga (hopefully in the upcoming arc :) I love also that you tied it to him losing his mother. I do believe that Orihime will become the center of his universe too so it's nice to see it in this fic. Lastly, love that Orihime resolved to live for him. Just beautiful how you tied everything together! Bravo!

I need to congratulate you. I have never read a fanfiction that left me literally breathless. I'm still shaking a little bit, massive chills. This is absolutely brilliant, I have never seen their love expressed in such a powerful way. This is definitely the best fic, even if it is a oneshot, that I have read in a long time.

Wow, this is powerful and so different to the normal IchiOri fics. Je l'aime!

sniff so touching. Luv the oneshot. keep it coming its good. =)

Incredible work, you really portrayed Orihime's true side well, fantastic!

I like Orihime's resolve here. Kind of reminds me of Kaoru during the revenge are in Rurokenshin

aww man, i should be working on a report right now, but i can't anymore. your story really inspired me. very good, and beautiful. you're a genius.