you can use my previous suggestion as an AE, alternate ending

Can't the wonderful author come in and save briittany and scare the elements away then if they defy you in another episode team dynamo can go against them and you can make another cameo. after all, all the good directors do it

That is how you do a good cliffhanger ;)

Explain what water bombs do.

A good bridge between chapters are short(er) stories

Oh I understand but there needs to be less time inbetween when the stories take place and make sure the reader knows everything that you review otherwise it is not a review rather it is an informative (if it is a noun). Expect to need to spell everything out for the readers with rare exceptions

again, a fantastic fanfic (say that five times fast). im almost positive the elements wouldnt really let the others go free just because brittany asked them to, but whatev i guess, it works. nice job on the trilogy, now give me something new to read!

Great story. You are really good.

HI!
Great story! But it was pretty sad...poor Brittany! Anyways, great job, keep writing!
~dyu123

That was a very good ending!
It was really touching too!
Keep up the good work!

You're getting better! I hope to see you again soon!

it was really really cute! I loved it!
I can't put update soon cause it's over... poo.
oh well you did a great job!
~Me

Great ending. So powerful. So wonderfully done. It wasn't bad at all. I loved this story. I really can't wait to read more.

Great chapter!
I feel sorry for Tim,after he lost Brittany.
But it's great to see that Tony and his familly let him stay with them!
This is really good so far!
Keep up the good work and update soon!

Poor Tim. I hope he's okay. Please update soon.