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| love2read2much 2008-03-29 ch 11, | abuseI'm glad I decided to go through all the older fan fics, otherwise I would have not gotten to read this great story. Really loved all the angst and tender B & B moments. Totally enjoyed it, and for them to declare their love for each other at the end was the perfect finish. I just love B & B. |
| Ice Cube1 2007-12-28 ch 11, | abuseWow. That was great, I was looking back through some old Bones fics that I hadn't read and came across this one. I read most of it last night and came back to finish it today. I read Water Lily and some of your oneshots before, and I would love to see some more multichapters, you write wonderfully. And no, I don't think this needed an epilogue, it was great right where you ended it, especially coming from where they left the end of season one off at. |
| imockyouwithmymonkeypants 2007-08-19 ch 11, | abuseGreat ending to the story |
| Leena7 2007-06-05 ch 10, | abuseyou do realize that the Ateens are doing a cover of Elvis right? He did it first and in my opinion way better. |
| Mosquito 2007-02-10 ch 11, | abuseI loved the ending! Just perfect! |
| Claire 2007-02-03 ch 11, anon. | abuseHi I've just read your story and I think it was great. it was technical, a bit scarey when Brennans in trouble but Booth saves her as usual. You've got the characters down so well. It would have been nice to see a bit more at the end. what happens next. keep writing. Thanks for the good story Claire |
| Aurellia 2007-01-31 ch 9, anon. | abusegod, l loved this chapter, the violent scence was one of the best , and i felt i was there. |
| Mockingbird84 2007-01-21 ch 11, | abuseYeah great chapter.. if anything too short!! Please update soon! |
| Bellabun 2007-01-21 ch 11, | abuseWell I just found this story and read it from beginning to end, and I must say...Brilliant. What a wonderful story, you had it all, suspense, crime, drama, romance, and comedy. Well written and thought out. I must say I was sad to see it end because it was such a good story, but I am glad that I found it after it was complete, because I don't think I could have waited for updates. Great story and I will add you to my authors list, can't wait to read more of your stuff. |
| SlvrNight 2007-01-20 ch 11, | abuseI loved that story. I just started on it today and thankfully it was already complete. I would really like to see an epiloge here. Just my opinion though. Very good story! |
| AJeff 2007-01-19 ch 11, | abuseLoved this chapter. It was worth the wait! Bravo! Applause! Encore! Yes, do an epilogue...only because I want more to read! Great story from begin to end! MASTERPIECE! |
| Queen Peacock 2007-01-19 ch 11, | abuseWow i read this whole story today and i have to say that this is one of the best. You really have a poetic flair when you write. Update soon. Great Job |
| Cora Clavia 2007-01-18 ch 11, | abuseAw . . . *blushes* . . . thanks for the box of chocolate Booths; I won't scar you by letting you know my plans for them . . . but awesome job on this story, I've loved it all. If you have a few chocolate Booths left over for yourself, I hereby beqeueath you a bottle of my super-secret recipe FBI caramel body armor. Enjoy. :-) |
| PurplePicklesUnite 2007-01-18 ch 11, | abuseI love it i love it! I can't believe it's over! The descriptions are really beautiful and detailed! I cant wait till the next one! |
| piano-fingers 2007-01-18 ch 11, | abuseI really liked this story. So well written...and a happy ending!! :-) an epilogue would be fun to read...*hinthint* lol. |