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Reviews for: Innocence Kept
T.L. Arens 4/10/10 . chapter 2
Very well written! You did a wonderful job describing their relationship without telling us; you showed it. Nicely done!
Ethos 10/5/08 . chapter 2
I rather like this. While there's no real precedent for this in the show, it does seem like something Dean would pull. I'm glad that Sam figured it out pretty quickly. No one trips and catches themselves with their knuckles :P Silly Dean, coming up with a story like that. Anyway, good job!
KatieLB 5/26/07 . chapter 2
Why is it i can totally see John joining dean into a fight club for quick cash... good little story..glad sammy put his foot down LOL... take care
KatieLB 5/26/07 . chapter 1
LOL magic words.. .oh how i love that dean. don't know how I missed your other stories but now I know what im doing for the rest of the weekend...so thanks for the entertainment! ttyl
Nana56 9/21/06 . chapter 2
I did enjoy it! Great job! That's what Dean is all about, right...doing the rough stuff so that Sam doesn't have to?
EagleGirl6 6/19/06 . chapter 2
Oh, that was good. Dean is such the good big brother, but we already knew that:)

I really gotta put Fight Club in my movie queue... It keeps coming up in the strangest places.

Thanks,

Kelly
JRAismine 6/13/06 . chapter 2
I really enjoy your stories (this is no exception)! I can really picture Dean doing this "so that Sam would never have to". Looking forward to reading more from you.
Halcyon Impulsion 6/7/06 . chapter 2
Well, I like this better than a lot of other conclusions... and it's sparked a thought of my own :) Or two :) Good writing, it's all so sad. And John Winchester should be smacked - why didn;t he do it himself? Tossing poor Dean in the ring. Sheesh.
ridley 6/7/06 . chapter 2
Great as usual, my friend. It never surprises me the things that Dean will do for his brother, and I've been waiting for this one, since you mentioned it. You are the amazing multi-tasker, and I'm so glad that you find time to share your talent with us starving fic readers.

Now get back to studying,

Ridley
H.T.Marie 6/7/06 . chapter 2
OOh, I like this concept. Ever since seeing Jensen in those cage matches in Dark Angel I've wanted more shirtless fighting Jensen, and shirtless, fighting Dean is even better. I've often wondered how they could possibly get enough money out of small town pool dudes to get gas let alone eat. If there really are fight clubs out there, then I'm so sure Dean would be right there in the thick of things.

HT
Ghostwriter 6/6/06 . chapter 2
Very cool. Great job. Good luck on your BAR exam. Btw, is it related to the LSAT, or are those for two completely different careers? Catch ya on the flip side.
Zenamydog 6/6/06 . chapter 2
Really different. I loved it!
Silver Kitten 6/6/06 . chapter 2
Is it just me, or is the thought of Dean in some grungy basement kicking a bunch of other guys around totally appealing? Huh...

I loved this. Yes, it was short, but in a sweet way that really got what needed to be said out. In such a small instance we still see how Dean fights, literally, for his brother...even when Sam doesn't know it. All the internal fights Dean goes through...I just want to squish him, he's so cute. (More than just cute, but you know what I mean).

The ipod thing was great. It was a good gift idea for Sam. And even Dean was in character. “Give it back. I thought you wanted to download your shitty music- but whatever.” LOL. Awesome little ficlet.
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