 Decepticon.Dak 11/30/07 . chapter 8 Decepticons!...Forever! |
 LycoX 4/1/07 . chapter 8heh.. scooby doo! And poor Prue.. but it had to happen. |
 RogueFanKC 4/1/07 . chapter 8TH, congratulations on finishing yet another story in this saga!
Wow. Vinny actually came through? Now I have to wonder at how long this good standing will hold before the said Morrowind team rises up to kill him for the next explosion?
Poor Prue and Andy. Losing him again is truly devastating and you did well writing her grief, and how well Godfrey is being a gentleman in not taking advantage and only being there as a friend. And kudos to Andy for understanding that and for accepting his death so readily.
Hm...actually, I'm confused. In Kingdom Hearts 2, Malecifent was actually against the Organization and fought against them and here, she'll be on their side as their ally along with the other Disney villians. This will be an interesting take on the story, and I can't wait to see it. And yes, I'm eager for the appearance of the Mystery Machine.
Excellent work on your story! I wish you well on your next one! |
 Mony19 4/1/07 . chapter 8Sad ending but Great nonetheless.
As big of a Prue/Andy fan I am, he needed to die, he should never have come back in the first place, so he had to die again and I hope he doesn't come back again. I do hope eventually Prue and Godfrey will finally get together, but i doubt it will happen soon as Prue is mourning at the moment. Her sisters will help her heal.
Yeah Scooby Doo, that is one of my favourite cartoons :)
Can't wait for the other one |
 Mony19 11/11/06 . chapter 7Great Chapter
Vinny is a riot, lol. Now the fighting begins. Gideon needs to stop playing tricks on the Elders, something important might come up and they are all drunk or something because of what he did.
ud soon |
 RogueFanKC 11/9/06 . chapter 7Ah, welcome back TH! Glad to have you! Hope you are doing all right since you have mentioned that real life was starting to take its toll on you. I hope things are OK.
Wow, Vinny seriously doesn't know when to quit, does he? It wa sincredibly funny to read Prue trying to warn Cavendish what he was getting himself into with that exploding cigar, only to have it blow up in his face. Literally.
And people betting on Donald bbashing his head in. Classic! As well as Natalie and Gideon getting high on B.A's coffee.
It is wonderful to see that the Medjai are willing to help the Morrowind crew, especially since the Germans and the Heartless are occupying the land, and at leas there was one successful raid on the German outpost. Unfortunately, Imohtep is going to strike back with full force and added interest.
Hope things turn out better! Continue soon! ) |
 CHaRMeDforYOU FFX2 9/30/06 . chapter 6Yay! u updated! I love the part with the electrifired floor, that was hilarious! Can't wait for more! |
 Mony19 9/25/06 . chapter 6Great chapter
Prue and Godfrey :). I hope Godfrey and the others succeed in their mission. Going across the desert of camels, that should be interesting for Prue and the others. Vinny going on the mission with them, oh boy, that can be a recipe for disaster, then again his crazy inventions should come in useful.
ud soon |
 RogueFanKC 9/24/06 . chapter 6Hey TH! Ah, I can certainly understand writer's block; I've been suffering from it too. It's hardly pleasant, but it's nice to see you update. )
Wow, so many times Vinny's being completely destructive, I wholeheartedly agree that it'll be put to good use against the Heartless. And it is reassuring that the Medjai were striking against the Heartless and the German forces.
It was also additionally nice of Kida to help Andy see the error of his ways, especially with Prue trying to help him.
Wow, journey across the desert on camel? This shall certainly be trying, and it's good to see that Alex is going to hold himself well in battle. Just hope his mother can be saved.
Continue soon! ) |
 Mony19 8/15/06 . chapter 5Great Chapter
Prue has to be careful with her powers since her emotions are running amuk. She is in a real conflict and it is nice that Godfrey isn't taking advantage of her situation so far. Andy is an ass, he needs to leave.
Vinny and Donald are funny as usual.
ud soon |
 RogueFanKC 8/15/06 . chapter 5TH, this was an excellent chapter!
And yes, Donald is certainly going to be hearing about his little injury for quite some time! Hee hee! I was chuckling when people kept making the jokes about his rear end, and doubly so when Prue was revealed to be in on the pool (yes, I have to agree; she didn't want Sora betting since it would ruin her chances of winning).
Andy is more and more decreasing in my sypathy, especially since he seems to forget that Prue is willing to fight to get back his life and that he was secretly working for Malecifent in the first place. This won't bode well...but thankfully, I'll see whether or not Andy, should he die, gracefully tells Prue to move on and to tell Godfrey that to take care of her.
Wow, Imhotep is plotting, Hades is succeeding, and Vinny may not last long enough if he keeps taking everyone's "no" as "make more". ) Can't wait to see what will happen next!
Continue soon, TH! ) |
 Phantom Creedy lover 8/15/06 . chapter 5Geez! ya think you could get any more explosions in there? _ good chapter again |
 CHaRMeDforYOU FFX2 8/14/06 . chapter 5YAY! U updated! I loved the part with Donald and the crew. It's hilarious! And poor Sora, he got hit in the head... maybe it'll knock some sense into him... lol. Aww! I feel horrible that Andy and Prue are fighting, but I feel worse for Godfrey! He doesn't even get the benifit of the doubt with Andy! PLEASE update soon! I love ur fic |
 Mony19 7/17/06 . chapter 4Great Chapter
I am glad they are going after Imhotep, I just hope they will be successful. I can't believe Andy, Prue is risking everything to save him (although I don't agree with her) and he is accusing her of cheating on him. I get he is insecure but that was uncalled for and makes me wish even more that he goes back to where he came from.
Hmm others are noticing Prue's attraction for Godfrey except Prue and Godfrey. Things should be interesting down the road. I love the kiss on the cheek thing :smiles:
Vinny is of course being Vinny, lol
ud soon |
 Phantom Creedy lover 7/16/06 . chapter 4Glad I'm not the only one who had the idea of a Mummy/Charmed crossover, nice job so far |