Simply brilliant story. You truly have a work of art here. Definitely in my top favorites. Thanks for writing this!

-Light's Fiery Dragon

Awesome story

Brilliant fic, brilliant characterisations. Easy to read, near impossible to stop... A true talent, you have!

I first found this fic on another site, and backtracked you to this one, as I was wondering if you'd be willing to answer some questions about fanfiction and how you create your works. I don't know if you still check this account, but if you'd be so kind, could you message/email me if you're interested? I'm currently writing an essay for publication about fanfic and fic authors, and would love your input.

Thanks in advance for any help you could give, and for sharing your talent with us!

Brilliant story!

I love the way you have written an alternative to cannon that just seems so right!

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Kamai6

I am a huge fan of your other work (several of your excellent Vader fics reside on my favorites list), but this ranks among the best. A longtime thorn in my side of the Star Wars universe is the Vader/Anakin and Leia relationship; Leia never knew how awesome her dad was. Now... it's only chapter 3 and Leia is invoking Vader's name already against Mon Mothma. Dare I hope for a reconciliation, or at least an easing of hatred between them?

Continuing with high expectations!

Okay! Great premise, execution was...abstract, which wasn't a bad thing.

You're a good writer, I can't wait to read more of your work.

Awesome! I can't believe just how much I enjoyed this... I really don't want it to end. You certainly have me hooked! Thanks for this wonderful AU - it's given me a lot to think about.

I was wondering how you would get Vader and Leia to work together, and I am really pleased at how you did it. I felt horrible reading Luke in such pain though. I also really liked the Han/Vader confrontation about why. Also, the overdone fear over Luke was really realistic, with Palpitine controlling Mothma, though I do wonder why she seemed to be so powerful that no one really questioned her except Leia. Keep writing!

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BUNNY

Love this story! :D

Aww… Poor Luke! Great characterization!

Wow. That was by far the best and most realistic AU Star Wars story I have ever read. That's not even an exaggeration. I've been looking for quality stories for days, and here I find a whole slew of them! If all of your stories are as good as this, I won't get much of anything done in the next week. Hello anti-socialism...but seriously, this story had everything I could possibly have wanted in a Star Wars fic, including a beautiful writing style. Lots of people convert Darth Vader to Anakin Skywalker in their stories, but this is the first that I've encountered that has made it realistic and believable. And cute I might add :D That ending made me want to jump around in joy. What can I say, I'm a sucker for happy endings. I'm also a sucker for Luke torture/conversion, so this fic made me happy in both aspects! Now, onto read the others...

Good story- and I liked the alliance of Leia and Vader and how Vader became Anakin, and just the entire flow of the story.

at story. really enjoyed reading it and liked the original idea of using the light force to win against palpatine.

Excellent story!

review number 3. i liked the happy ending, so i thought i'd leave a message.