 Katie B18 2009-07-11 . chapter 8lol too funny i loved it |
 Akai.Akumu 2009-07-05 . chapter 8Aw... hehehe i enjoyed this. This is the longest fic i've read by you! O.O and i enjoyed it much! Megumi's departure happened before Sanosuke's though in the manga right? I'm not sure about the crappy OVAs but she left first in the manga. |
 Little Dear One 2007-03-26 . chapter 8Hurray for Megumi and Sano! ^_^ I enjoyed reading this story. =D You give the characters new charm and wit that makes this story very attractive and fun.
It's highly amusing and very tactfully written. I buy everything expect that Sano might randomly sleep with a hooker. =/ I dunno, maybe I'm just optimistic, but I'd rather not believe it'd happen. I'm not sure it fits with his personality either. But it's not too bad given the context. =)
Very well done! I really liked it! ^_^ |
 Mistress 0f Dragons 2006-10-09 . chapter 8KAWAII! i loved that story!! |
 Chizi 2006-07-26 . chapter 8 OMFG! [_>; If he EVER does that again he'll answer to me. o.O; -shakes a fist.- |
 kokoronagomu 2006-07-16 . chapter 8i have always thought of sano as an intellegent man who was never exposed to education and culture. i'm sure with the right motivation and teacher, he could do/be anything.
that was very entertaining and well written. i also share your views of seisouhen and the television show after the kyoto arc. |
 peregrine829 2006-06-23 . chapter 8Great story, loved it. |
 sanodevil 2006-06-23 . chapter 8 I love this story. It's really cool. |
 corrakun 2006-06-22 . chapter 8i really like this story, and so i thought that it should've gotten more reviews. you might get more reviews if you slowly post each chapter, instead of posting them all at once, even if you finished writing the story.
also, the ending was a little rushed. the beginning was really good - nice pacing.
language is uncharacteristic of the characters and the story itself. you made sano a little too punkish and badass, and unbelievably stupid. megumi got over it a little too fast, too.
work on your characterization a bit more, but other than that, this story is really good. |
 skenshingumi 2006-06-09 . chapter 1After how slow and clueless Kenshin has been with women, I find it very amusing that he is the one most interested in playing matchmaker for Sano and Megumi. It's also sweet since he is obviously very happy and wants his friends to be happy too.
I think you are doing a good job with the characterizations. I did like how Sano gets right into mixing things up with Kenji. That seems so very in character and reminiscent of his relationship with Yahiko. I also liked how it was Kenshin not Kaoru that had a talk with Megumi about her feelings. Kenshin was always able to get under people's radar and talk about the heart of the matter. |
 roosterboy 2006-06-09 . chapter 1 Brilliant! I enjoyed reading that enormously! |
 Crewel 2006-06-08 . chapter 8This is good beginning for you to write SxM fiction. I really enjoyed to read this fiction. Sano is an idiot! He shouldn't sleep with the hooker if he really love Megumi. I'm so glad that he appoloize to Megumi at last. They solved their problem at last. Thank you for sharing this interesting fiction. I hope you will post more SxM fictions soon. |
 shysie 2006-06-08 . chapter 8I enjoyed the story. It was well written, and it kept me interested |
 Majime Noubenka 2006-06-07 . chapter 8Nice job with the fic, very humorous for the most part though. I gotta say that even with Sano's track record for drinking, gambling, and all things seedy, I can't see him being unfaithful to a woman's he's dating, especially if that woman is Megumi. In the manga Sano appears much smarter than how you have him depicted here, though for the most part you've got him pretty much dead on.
That aside though, the story itself was a good read, and I'm glad to be one of the first reviewers to say good job, and keep writing, especially Sano&Megumi centered fics like this (though let's try to lighten up some next time shall we?) Later. |