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Reviews For: Return of the Rooster

Little Dear One
2007-03-26
ch 8,
abuseHurray for Megumi and Sano! ^_^ I enjoyed reading this story. =D You give the characters new charm and wit that makes this story very attractive and fun.
It's highly amusing and very tactfully written. I buy everything expect that Sano might randomly sleep with a hooker. =/ I dunno, maybe I'm just optimistic, but I'd rather not believe it'd happen. I'm not sure it fits with his personality either. But it's not too bad given the context. =)
Very well done! I really liked it! ^_^
Mistress of Earth
2006-10-09
ch 8,
abuseKAWAII! i loved that story!!
Chizi
2006-07-26
ch 8, anon.
abuseOMFG! [_>; If he EVER does that again he'll answer to me. o.O; -shakes a fist.-
kokoronagomu
2006-07-16
ch 8,
abusei have always thought of sano as an intellegent man who was never exposed to education and culture. i'm sure with the right motivation and teacher, he could do/be anything.

that was very entertaining and well written. i also share your views of seisouhen and the television show after the kyoto arc.
peregrine829
2006-06-23
ch 8,
abuseGreat story, loved it.
sanodevil
2006-06-23
ch 8, anon.
abuseI love this story. It's really cool.
corrakun
2006-06-22
ch 8,
abusei really like this story, and so i thought that it should've gotten more reviews. you might get more reviews if you slowly post each chapter, instead of posting them all at once, even if you finished writing the story.

also, the ending was a little rushed. the beginning was really good - nice pacing.

language is uncharacteristic of the characters and the story itself. you made sano a little too punkish and badass, and unbelievably stupid. megumi got over it a little too fast, too.

work on your characterization a bit more, but other than that, this story is really good.
skenshingumi
2006-06-09
ch 1,
abuseAfter how slow and clueless Kenshin has been with women, I find it very amusing that he is the one most interested in playing matchmaker for Sano and Megumi. It's also sweet since he is obviously very happy and wants his friends to be happy too.

I think you are doing a good job with the characterizations. I did like how Sano gets right into mixing things up with Kenji. That seems so very in character and reminiscent of his relationship with Yahiko. I also liked how it was Kenshin not Kaoru that had a talk with Megumi about her feelings. Kenshin was always able to get under people's radar and talk about the heart of the matter.
roosterboy
2006-06-09
ch 1, anon.
abuseBrilliant! I enjoyed reading that enormously!
Crewel
2006-06-08
ch 8,
abuseThis is good beginning for you to write SxM fiction. I really enjoyed to read this fiction. Sano is an idiot! He shouldn't sleep with the hooker if he really love Megumi. I'm so glad that he appoloize to Megumi at last. They solved their problem at last. Thank you for sharing this interesting fiction. I hope you will post more SxM fictions soon.
shysie
2006-06-08
ch 8,
abuseI enjoyed the story. It was well written, and it kept me interested
Ishimaru Amon
2006-06-07
ch 8,
abuseNice job with the fic, very humorous for the most part though. I gotta say that even with Sano's track record for drinking, gambling, and all things seedy, I can't see him being unfaithful to a woman's he's dating, especially if that woman is Megumi. In the manga Sano appears much smarter than how you have him depicted here, though for the most part you've got him pretty much dead on.

That aside though, the story itself was a good read, and I'm glad to be one of the first reviewers to say good job, and keep writing, especially Sano&Megumi centered fics like this (though let's try to lighten up some next time shall we?) Later.
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