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| GuesssWho 2008-02-26 ch 10, anon. | abuseContinue! |
| jacobsbooo 2007-08-02 ch 10,  | abuseNice plot and your writing is very good. It isn't messy or anything. Update soon. |
| princess moon shadow 2007-06-11 ch 10, | abuseLove it!I like the way Bille interacts with everyone. |
| glennscm 2006-09-11 ch 9, | abusei like it so far please continue it soon |
| aryn-vernier 2006-07-01 ch 6, | abuseTo say the least, I'm not very impressed. The story is pretty much cliche with Billie being Logan's kid. That's..Pretty much the most common thing in the X-Men fandom. Also, Admantium, is impossible to break, so there wouldn't be any way that Billie's ribs could break, even if it's 'organic' which is also, fairly impossible. I think you should probably stick to the CSI. |
| Siobhaneya 2006-06-28 ch 9, | abuseYess! I love it so far, i guess it was only the first one that made Billie look a little like a mary sue. But for the last 8 chapters she is far from being one! Great job, this is definatly one of my favourite stories! UPDATE soon! Trust me your succeeding! (you can email me whenever you want!) |
| Lupo Nero 2006-06-28 ch 9, anon. | abuseoh wow, so then Billie did not want to be saved...interesting.. Deutscher sehr interessant zu sprechen, wo sind Sie erlernten? its getting interesting, keep updating |
| LoveToRead11 2006-06-28 ch 9, | abuseI am loving the story! It is really, really good! And I can't wait to see what happens next! |
| princess moon shadow 2006-06-28 ch 9, | abuseI love it! |
| Siobhaneya 2006-06-26 ch 1, | abuse*cough, cough* mary sue *cough, cough* when you said she was perfect that just gave away she was a mary sue, but other wise the plot is great, this could turn out to be a great ff but remember, NOBODY IS PERFECT, please make billie normal |
| princess moon shadow 2006-06-26 ch 8, | abuseLove it! |
| Troo 2006-06-25 ch 7, | abuseHad the evening off from work and decided to live at for the night. Was reading "What the Eyes Can't See" and decided to see what else you'd written. By golly, an X-Men story! And an interesting one to boot. Can't wait to read more of either story. :) |
| Lupo Nero 2006-06-24 ch 7, anon. | abusedis is awesome, i like the attitude, it does seem to fit the persons rightly (better than i could ever do). i hope you get the chance to update soon! Long nights, pleasant days lupo nero |
| LoveToRead11 2006-06-20 ch 7, | abuseNo thank you for putting up such a good story for me to read! And keep up the great work! I love it!! |
| princess moon shadow 2006-06-18 ch 7, | abuseLove it! |