|Reviews for In Zanarkand|
| Mavellena 8/14/07 . chapter 1
Although forever these ruins may last
And countless people have these ruins passed
I like those 2 sentences the most. I didn't like the date phrase.
| Warui-Usagi 6/8/06 . chapter 1
Oh, that was really good! Like a nice poem every now and then. Great work! :D
| Painted Sky 6/8/06 . chapter 1
I know for a fact that this is what every poet does NOT want to hear, but your rhymes sounded a little bit forced. I really liked the idea, and certain lines stuck out, such as "In Zanarkand, six learn the lie,". This line stuck out as being really inspired.