Excellent story! I think you did a great job on the Tusken culture.

great chapter

I kept forgetting this wasn't canon at times!

... Also, I am going to hit you with a large, hardcover book for that reference to Ani leaving his mom. Hrmpf. Shameless! Shameless!

And I mean it about the book.

Just sayin'. :D

I adored this story, wonderfully written!

Wow, that was a very interesting and well written story. I really enjoyed it, and loved your take on Luke as a Tusken, which is a wonderful original idea.

Ha! A Tusken seeing ice and snow for the first time!!

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Well! Well well well! This is interesting... instead of simply distracting Vader, Han's going to demolish the Death Star!

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It all does come down to family in the end, doesn't it?

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Beautiful, beautiful story. I loved how you pretty much threw out movies 5 and 6 and write your own ideas. It was fantastic. And I like the idea that Vader isn't dead. he's such a deep character. Keep writing!

This was very, very good. I truly enjoy your style of writing, and the original story you have devised. It was a pleasure to read. Keep writing!

Wonderful read! Bravo!

Recced it on delicious. :)

I love the culture you've created. You've built the Sandpeople from the ground up, and I adore all the detail you've put into it. I'm a myth nerd, and recognize several pieces. They're all twined together into a coherent people, with rational customs and a full history, and that makes your Skywalker a very solid character. Wind-Dancer is an excellent OC, as are the rest of the Tuskens.

The details are amazing, the plot fits together with the action/imagery perfectly, and I love your characters. Great story!

Wonderful, beautiful story. This story is worth mentioning to anyone who has a love of the StarWars saga, and you did an excellent job of the Tusken culture.

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Good!

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I really loved this story and i enjoyed the day to day life of the tuskens tremendously