Oh God. That was so sad. And hot, very hot.

Poor Naruto.

...dang man this was...wow |_| I liked the way Naruto spoke it really sound depressing but very good!

Sadness. That is all I can give for this story. I dont know if you heard of Ayumi Hamasaki's Ourselves, but you should try to have it playing as you read this story. It doesn't really matter if you don't understand what she is saying, it just spikes up the angst more if you do.

How very sad. Poor Naruto

How the hell did you get that idea from Hoodwinked? lol.

Wow. Great plot, I've never read a story with anything like this even hinted at before, but I loved it-wish it was longer- but definately loved it.

*smirk* Does this mean that Naruto/Itachi was on top..? X3

...oh..my...god.. wow/why/good/...?

That's sad.

As I said, wonderful characterization of the inner workings of the character.
Between Sasuke's Emoness and Naruto's inherent distrust of people from being shunned, you've done a great job capturing them.

this is disturbing...and i can't see how hoodwinked influence the idea for this fanfic...but maybe it is the combination of hoodwinked and dracula I and other movies that got to you. well at least you got the haunting idea out of your head. uchihacest scares the hell out of me but this was a thankfully short and sad story. poor naruto. this fic shows how understanding he truly is.

Like you(atleast I think...), I don't like Uchihacest! But I really like your writing style a lot, alot, and I also know that you are a super Sasunaru fan(not much else) which I LOVE!! So I gave it a go! It made me sad, sad that Sasuke is..erm..messed up in the head? and that Naruto loves him so much that he doesn't care if he loves him back as long as he can be with him T_T
Good job though!! Naru will make him better >

This is so sad! And wrong! I hate Uchihacest, there's no proof and I think it's sick, sorry to offend anyone who actually *likes* it though. And Sasuke even asks him to turn into other people? Like who, what kind of sick, twisted person is he?

Then again, maybe he's so disgusted with himself that he doesn't want to taint Naruto with his disgustedness and would rather it seem like he's doing someone else, but it's still wrong. I know you won't do any more chapters, but I really want Naruto to maybe start liking some other guy and have Sasuke get jealous and claim Naruto as Naruto. Possessive Sasuke is just so cute! ^^

You really must have been really crazy when watching all those movies and thinking suddenly up a crazy thing like this. No offense, but I think this is too confusing to ASK for another chapter.

I also want to know more about Love Thy Brother, too... Am I selfish for wanting that?

Failing Mentality.

AW, poor Naruto, cuteness though!

*sniffles* that was an amazing story...so sad! But, at the same time...very interesting!...^^ I liked it immensely!

*sniff sniff* That's was great, very touching. Thanks!