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| xxStolenLovexxGidoxx 2008-08-06 ch 1,  | abuseWow, that was short simple and very nice. I really liked it. I didnt get the ending the first secound I read it but then taking a glance back it all made sense. Very nice. ^^ |
| Amaranth O'Riley 2008-08-05 ch 1, | abuseThis is amazing! I can't even begin to describe it...I always wanted to read a story with Gordon figuring out Batman's identity. |
| Lady Vader 2008-07-19 ch 1, anon. | abuseI loved this. =] Dialogue was a bit hard to follow, but I loved the story. |
| kaitlynvoncat 2008-06-03 ch 1, | abuseI liked it and the ending was very good. It was a bit hard to follow with the dialogue though. I got a bit confused on who was talking and what not. |
| A. Nonny Mas 2007-06-06 ch 1, anon. | abuseI agree. SCREW THE TIME LINE!! THis story is great. Gordon has always been a kinda father figure annd this ties it together beautifuly. I would love to read more to this. hint hint ;-) |
| jadeddiva 2007-03-28 ch 1, | abuseCute premise - I love the idea of Barbara/Bruce. Following the dialogue was a bit hard, though, but the idea was fantastic. |
| Raz 42492 2006-11-12 ch 1, | abuseah that is really good! i can't wait for the next chapter |
| Philippa 2006-10-24 ch 1, | abuseWow! This was such a good idea. I especially loved the ending, where it's so important to Bruce to have Jim's approval :D Screw the timeline, I say! It works for me! I am going to do some more work, and then I will reward myself with your sequel. So - you are going to participate in the Batman Begins fanfiction challenge, right? (It's in the Batman Begins forum "Batman Begins Fanfic Faves".) Because you absolutely and completely totally should! |
| chemqueen 2006-08-30 ch 1, | abusei realize that this story is supposed to be 'yay! he's in love', but it also has a sort of darker side; you wonder, what happens to gotham without him? |
| IcyWaters 2006-06-08 ch 1, | abuseSince my last review seemed to have disappeared, I thought I’d leave another. :-) I really enjoyed this, especially how it’s hinted that Jim had already figured out Batman’s identity. You did a fantastic job of capturing their unusual relationship. I do hope you will be posting more Batman fic soon! |
| cellorocksmyworld 2006-06-08 ch 1, | abuseWow. That was awesome! Good job, and keep writing! |
| Madame-Cazone 2006-06-08 ch 1, | abuseYou really should keep going. This could get really good! |
| kykimolvr 2006-06-07 ch 1, | abuseSo good. This is very good. Keep it up. |