You tackle a complex issue, and do it well. You did a great job with characterization, and showing the shifting dynamics between Riku and Sora after that moment in the alley. Somehow, you have to almost admire how Riku can warp memories to fit his desires. He has such a silver tongue, no wonder Sora's still in shock and doesn't know what to do.

I like how you split this into two chapters. I agree that the ending of chapter one is perfect as is, since it makes the entire one-shot focus on that moment in the alley. But I like this second chapter as an additional scene to reveal the aftermath. The break in chapter emphasizes that it's an add-on instead of an integral part of the story.

that was super hot great job.

I applaud you. I really do.

When I first read this story, I got so caught up it the words and beat of the story that I had to read it two more times to fully understand. You truly have a glorious gift!

i want too see Sora in the costume

Wow, intense, but so so good

i dont know if i should feel a tiny bit sorry for sora or not... nah he's got riku so what's there to be sad about! D

You are a sick and twisted person. I like that. c:

Wow...that was scary. :( Poor Sora...it made me really feel sad.

So dark, your way with words is amazing. You, my friend, are very talented. :] Amazing job.

Omg. Ok. Sorry, but THIS is the hottest fic I have ever read. Wow. You are shaping up to be one of my favourite authors, you write really well! Good job on this, because it was dark but HOT. I love it!

Words can't even describe how great that was.

aw sora is prancing around in my head in these outfits :D

oh whoa, this is so strange, yet beautifully realistic, and i actually feel sorry for the both of them (for the two crazies that they are).

thank you for writing this.

:-)

Goodness. You undoubtedly have a wonderful way with words. Your writing feels like the words to beautiful (if sometimes dark) instrumental music. Lovely.

...I'm kind of speechless.

Fantastic!

0.0...*bow down* This story is, honestly, the best one I've read on this site...The writing is phenominal, the story line makes sense, it's enjoyable, a total guilty pleasure. Seeing that Riku/Sora is my new fave pairing, I just love what u've done here. Seriously, amazing job!