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| xcheesexwafflesx 2008-07-20 ch 13,  | abusethis was great. i feel so bad for chris though!! it was great, how you planned evrything and it was just great. |
| AshleyMarieHalliwell 2008-07-09 ch 13, anon. | abuseHi, I really enjoyed this story. I can't even imagine how you were able to write those scenes that got so emotional. I was almost crying for cris myself. :`( Anyways point being that I really enjoyed it and hope that you write alot more charmed stuff. |
| Aria DeLoncray 2008-06-09 ch 13, | abuseGreat story! |
| luv me xoxo gossipgal 2008-05-26 ch 13, | abuseoh man. that was a good story |
| WHYBENORMAL93 2008-01-11 ch 13, | abuseFinally Chris got some power!! Even if he wasn't as powerful as Wyatt he still deserved more than he got in the show! Great story! |
| Sailor-Lit 2007-10-30 ch 13, | abuseI LOVED,LOVED,& LOVED it! |
| iamkagomeiloveinuyasha 2007-09-29 ch 13, | abuseutterly awesome! super amazing! tear jerking fabulous! YOU ARE AWESOME! |
| HauntedPast 2007-07-09 ch 13, | abuseI liked this! I love that Chris had so many cool powers! You did a good job with this, seeing as there are so many other stories that have the Charmed ones and Chris go through the boy's memories in a traumatic fashion. I liked it, but the ending was a little abrupt. Wonderful job, though! |
| ColorsOver 2007-06-12 ch 12, | abusePoor chris thinking he's worthless and all |
| ColorsOver 2007-06-12 ch 11, | abusepoor chris wyatt is such a b*tch |
| ColorsOver 2007-06-12 ch 8, | abuseAmazing. Luv it |
| ColorsOver 2007-06-12 ch 6, | abusewhat a spiteful demon |
| ColorsOver 2007-06-12 ch 5, | abuseWah poor chris, he's been through so much and with leo being a b*tch-b@st@rd hybrid (sorry my new insult) it's not helping poor chris. |
| ColorsOver 2007-06-12 ch 3, | abuseHa Chris is just too cool. Green bubble of awesomeness. |
| ColorsOver 2007-06-12 ch 2, | abusethis story is great! I really like it, the only thing is that it's lacking in description. Instead of: After the scene had finished, they were back in the maze. You could put something like: The group watched much to Paiges horror as the scene unfolded infront of their eyes. It seemed like slow motion as the car crashed and burst into flames. They saw younger paige reappear outside the car unharmed, both paiges wore the same heartwrenching pained expression. Or soemthing like that. It's realatively short and it gives the readers more to go by. I still like it. *favess* Please don't take it personally, jsut a suggestion |