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Reviews For: When Hope Fails

JadedAnna
2006-07-24
ch 1,
abuseGood plot... but... the characters just weren't... I dunno... Like they would never say some of the things they said... they talk different than in ur story. like when piper said "why, oh, why" it sounded kinda cheesy.. just my opinion but other than that it was good
Piper Halliwell200788
2006-06-09
ch 1,
abuseOmg! *Tear* I'm glad she didn't die!! I think there should be more charmed stories like that one because they are actually dealing with real life issues. :) Keep up the good work...
ColePhoebe4eva
2006-06-09
ch 1,
abuseGreat story, it's really well written well done! Really sad though, so glad everything turned out ok in the end. Please write more!
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