Reviews for In the Hospital Room

Ducky'sgirl4ever 2008-04-13 ch 1,	abuseA great story. I liked the part where the team was checking on Flack.
DistractedlyHere 2006-07-18 ch 1,	abuseSo nice. Very well-told.
Christina Dimgwrthien 2006-06-08 ch 1,	abuseis dead Okay, you just nailed Flack on the head. I LOVE the sidenotes on the nurse and about Danny. Seriously, I had gotten so used to angsty post-CotP!Don, but you just kept the Flack genes alive. :)
Clodagh 2006-06-08 ch 1,	abuseThat was really good, I LOVE Flack!! The story was class!!
DraejonSoul 2006-06-07 ch 1,	abuseI'm a sucker for COTP Flack, so I've been constantly looking out for it. One would wish for character interaction, slower pacing and such, but then, one needs to work while the inspiration strikes, right? (I just wrote a Flack/COTP-related oneshot, while at work, too, so I definitely know what you went through. =) ) Just wondering though: - "He coughed then, his throat raw from having a tube stuck down it during surgery." - IMHO, it felt kinda out of place, because Don could not have known that he was intubated (or something), specially since the succeeding paragraphs described he had just woken up. But please don't let this little crit stop you from making more! I liked the narrative flow of this little story, and how it had Don's "voice" in the narration (if that made any sense. ^^;). Heh. On sick bay, and he's already checking out the hot nurses? Bad Flackie! XD