I just found this story, it's been 3 months since anyone's reviewed.
That snake reference with the title, tells me some of the future plot.. from what I see:
This might've made a good story if it wasn't metaphorically & maybe literaly collecting dust in Liz-Kaguya's attic...
So far; cool.

hey. this story is awesome! btw, i'm omichan12 (soon hpoefuly).

-runs around room- dragons! dragons! dragons! i luv dragons! and i absolutly love this story! plz update soon!

Liz: yuck I hate snakes
Marie: yah their almost as bad as spiders
Liz: and who is this new girl?
Marie: you’ll fine out just wait
Liz: me wait ? No way write now!

sorry not quite getting it.

cool beginning... is your blind girl in this fanfic? and why are they there?

-Liz (i suppose i'll find out soon)

UPDATE! please? pretty please? pretty pretty please? I'm gonna shut up now -.-
anywho, I REALLY like this...update?

hey i love this story when do the sand siblings come i had this to favorites but please please dont make this naruto/hinata romansise please make it kiba or gaara or someone but no naruto please thank you i just love this story though at first i thought this was some future store are the four other girls form the leaf

Cool Story please update soon!!

Your story seems really good but it also seems kinda rushed at the same time. A really goos story so far though. I can't wait for the rest of the chaooter

i like plz update soon

wow can you believe it took me THIS long to read and write this review! bet you didn’t even think i would... well i did HA!

any way those kids sound just like me and my friends, I hope you write more soon! I really enjoyed it

-Liz