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| AbeoUmbra 2007-06-26 ch 1, | abuseInteresting... |
| JustWriter2 2006-06-14 ch 1, | abuseIt has faded back into the... what? That poor elfling. T_T |
| The Untold Chronicles 2006-06-09 ch 1, | abusewow. very nice. |
| Ellfine 2006-06-08 ch 1, | abuseThis was so sad and yet lovely. What an interesting perspective seeing inside Mandos the Immovable. Wasn't Luthien the only one to move him to pity? Love the reason for the silver in his eyes. Nicely done. You need to insert a line to show where a story ends, Makes it easier on the reader. |