I love that it's all dialogue it makes it cuter then it would be with the extra

This was fun. Personally I thought Harry was a little too polite for him, but that's just me. I enjoyed reading this.

Heh, Harry and Harmione were kind of acting like newlyweds but at the same time it was quite amusing. Especially when Ron doesn't have a clue in how treat Hermione like a lady.

loll nice one, i usually dont understand who's who in purely dialogue fics, but you managed really well
great job =]
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ok very good story and the ending was very cute keep it up

lol. I like it though. I don't think it's all bad.

I think this dialogue fic was really nice. I liked it.

i dont really see harry acting like that but it was quite good and very funny. i got a good laugh out of it.

very cute. loved it.

I like it...But Harry seems to be a little odd. Even though he's being polite!

HA HA poor Ron oh well GO h/hr!

cute

that's great!

Yea, Harry and Hermione! I love this! I'm glad you gave a good reason why Hermione doesn't like Ron; he was such a bother! Good story!

that was sweet and ron was so stupid...lol he justs goes for luna lovegood! classic! this was romantic and kind of funny in a way